if you could see my pain

if you could see my pain you would see it forever thats how long it is just going down this lonely world alone and no one can see who i am the darkness shadows over me to close my eyes in vain if only you could see my pain if only you was my friend if only it was not vain than you could see my pain you could love me not hate
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Posted: Nov 2010

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pinkcoral
if you could see my pain......
poeple has pain and living everyday like you john.
can you see my pain.
I got too much pain though......hug
stillframe
thanks my friend
Carltios
John, the best thing you can do is move on. If you continue to dwell in the pain of the past it will eat you alive. You only live once my friend. Life is short. Chalk it up as a learning experience. Life is full of ups and downs. Start working on tomorrows happy memories today.


Best of Luck!


Carlitoscomfort
stillframe
right thanks my friend
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