Oh Blessed Numbness..

She walks along a rigid path,
On eggshells she knows she must tread..
Where she once dreamt of quiet walks along a romantic beach,
On sandpaper she now walks instead.
In the beginning it was wonderful
No grey skies to to darken her path
But now most days are spent in constant fear
As the main target of his wrath.
And so she goes on day after day ..
And she wonders just what went wrong
She did everything just right or so she thought..
Did all she could do to just get along.
One day she tired of always trying
To be just what he wanted her to be
No matter what she did it was never enough
She longed to loosen the chains and be free
Now she walks in quiet solitude
Blessed numbness fills most of her day
She smiles laughs and cries in all the right places
While trying to convince everyone she's ok.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2009
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gypsyheart
Walking away with a price to pay....beautifully expressed like all your poems QShug
sabeel
dear poet.. QuietStormF
"She walks along a rigid path,
As the main target of his wrath
She did everything just right or so she thought..
No matter what she did it was never enough
Now she walks in quiet solitude"

ITS JUST TO TELL YOU WHAT I GET FROMYOUR POEM.
I AM I RIGHT?
OR..
SABEEL.
Bentlee
i like this release, very cool projection of thought Q S:)
shhores
it so brings us in to the realness of our lives
thankyou once again for this..
poetengineer
beleive me it is beautiful thought , u always doing great ,u r majesty queen
QuietStormF
Thanks Gypsyheart.. much appreciated.. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks Bentlee.. I do thank-you for your comments..teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you shorres... it's real and it's hits home or many of us.. sad flower
QuietStormF
Thanks for your kind words Poetengineer.. Well my father did used to call me the Queen of Sheba?lol teddybear
boyshchrm6
Very well written and honest.
Others should have your courage.cool angel thumbs up angel crying angel angel
jazzy75
QuietStorm - i know this feeling, you expressed it beautifully.bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you..boyshchrm hug teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Jazzy..hug teddybear
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