She walks along a rigid path, On eggshells she knows she must tread.. Where she once dreamt of quiet walks along a romantic beach, On sandpaper she now walks instead. In the beginning it was wonderful No grey skies to to darken her path But now most days are spent in constant fear As the main target of his wrath. And so she goes on day after day .. And she wonders just what went wrong She did everything just right or so she thought.. Did all she could do to just get along. One day she tired of always trying To be just what he wanted her to be No matter what she did it was never enough She longed to loosen the chains and be free Now she walks in quiet solitude Blessed numbness fills most of her day She smiles laughs and cries in all the right places While trying to convince everyone she's ok.
dear poet.. QuietStormF "She walks along a rigid path, As the main target of his wrath She did everything just right or so she thought.. No matter what she did it was never enough Now she walks in quiet solitude"
ITS JUST TO TELL YOU WHAT I GET FROMYOUR POEM. I AM I RIGHT? OR.. SABEEL.
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"She walks along a rigid path,
As the main target of his wrath
She did everything just right or so she thought..
No matter what she did it was never enough
Now she walks in quiet solitude"
ITS JUST TO TELL YOU WHAT I GET FROMYOUR POEM.
I AM I RIGHT?
OR..
SABEEL.
thankyou once again for this..
Others should have your courage.