ghost inside haunting the alive. take for granted what's buried inside. heart of stone yet so still. these thornes are breaking me for real. goddess i love show truth for your will. to hold nothing a soul to steal the eyes of my love don't forsake me. come inside my heart and see. that my love is for you only.
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 15, 2011
Lovely sentiment Stillframe.
anggrek24indonesia, Jakarta IndonesiaFeb 15, 2011
Lovely,I really like it
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAFeb 15, 2011
thanks my friends
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAFeb 15, 2011
Stillframe.... you're poetry is definitely getting BETTER!!! This one caused me to read and re-read several times... there's some SERIOUS passion being expressed in this write!!! My favorite of yours thus far!! On a scale of 1 - 10 ..... you're pushing a 9+ !!!
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAFeb 15, 2011
thanks very much i just can't wait i find one inside of me that pushes the limits
heliyatehran, IranFeb 16, 2011
nice poem john
heliyatehran, IranFeb 16, 2011
nice poem john
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAFeb 16, 2011
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