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There once was a man who was full of despair-
his heart had been broken. He sat on his chair
and kept thinking 'dear god- does it have to be me?
I have done nothing wrong- what's the point-don't you see?'

The question kept flying around in his head
until he did wish he was already dead;
When that didn't work, he went upstairs to sleep,
he kept tossing and turning and tried to count sheep.

Next morning, the question had not dissappeared-
still there, and much stronger than ever he feared:
He looked at his hands and woke up. "What is that?"-
for right there, in his hands, was a thing- round and flat.

It looked like a sickle- a handle, a blade;
the man was not sure of what stuff it was made.
He got out of bed, left the house, and went on
to talk to the priest at the church of St. John.

The priest told him all he did know about god,
and about mortal sin, and the devil: Of fraud
and deception, of angels and Saints and of such-
but none of that helped him along very much.

So he left the church, and went on down the road,
'til he came to the government-palace. He thought
"Maybe they know a little bit more about this".
So he asked "could I speak to the President, please?"

The President talked of political things-
of communists, fascists and Dominos. Rings
which held down the nation like shackles and such-
but non of that helped him along very much.

Another bit further, he took a right turn,
'til he got to a building which looked like an urn
which people keep ashes in. Outside, it said
on a sign: "Department of fear"- in blood-red.

Inside was a General, who told him of threats:
Of scary things: Enemies- fascists and reds;
of people who want to invade and of such;
but non of that helped him along very much.

And finally, he did arrive at the park;
He strolled down a path, while the song of a lark
did accompany him. He was tired of all
and just wanted to sit on a bench near the wall.

He sat and did notice a woman: Right there;
she seemed lost in thought, he did notice. Her hair
did cover her eyes, so that she could not see
that he sat beside her. He thought "who is she?"

And then he did notice that in her right hand
she held a familiar object: The land-
and the whole world seemed to dance round in a twirl
'til she noticed him. "Are you alright?", said the girl.

He silently held up his own question-mark;
then she held up hers. The song of the lark
it was still in the air- as they took the two things
and held them together. They looked like two wings...
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Ages ago I saw a Czech animation-film describing precisely what the poem describes; I just couldn't resist...

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swade777
Joe, besides being a terrific poet and gentleman, you're a patient and kind man as well! Thanks for being a part of poets corner!!
Hekamaat
Thanks...
Well, it does have its limits.
If someone doesn't like what I write- so be it.
He can feel free to tear it to pieces, shred it, spit on it, dance on top of it or roll it up like a newspaper and turn it into a lollipop for all I care. head banger

But he will kindly do it out here- and not by way of my mailbox where no one else can see it:
My mailbox is no ones personal spitting-bowl, and I'm no ones foot-mat... professor laugh
thesunandthesea
HIIIIII)))) HEKAMAAT...

I loved your write (This one is really nice!!!) ^___^ and... hahaha I think your patient is (almost) out of control now... lolol see your face -> very mad lol relaaaaaxxxxxx))) lol

I love straight people like you so much!!! frankly speaking!!! loved it! grin heheee

Just admire you!!! I feel like you are the same type as me..wink lol but am not so kind as you, talk to hand I meant, I don't tell people before I ban them nor do I give them a chance. hmmm lol They are not my friend anyway. I don't know them...( dont want to know either. lol)giggle ... anyway, I'm no angel... I am >> devil lol I just don't want to get anything 'weird' in my mailbox. blushing LOL

By the way, you are JOE , I am JIB. innocent LOL


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Redex
Surprising who you meet on a benchlaugh
No sorry I enjoyed from begining to endpeace
marikia
Your straight logic brought you to that bench where you and she belong. Splendid ending of a nice poem in which two question marks turn into a good wholesome heart. I too used to bother you a little by popping into your mail box without invitation, pardon me for that, but now I see that it was worthwhile after all.
Hekamaat
@ thesunandthesea: Thanks a million! Well- I enjoyed writing that poem... Back when I saw that film I was surprised to find it was from Czechoslovakia (must have been the late `70s...), and I loved the concept it portrayed.
As for the rest- if someone just wants to be an insufferable lump of anti-humanity it can't be helped; but there's no point adding to that.
Nice to meet you, JIB!laugh bouquet

@ Redex: Thanks! That's what it's for; if it had that effect, it was worth writing...

@ Marikia: Thank you very much for your kind words.
And if I may say so: It takes a great person to admit a wrong- but it takes a truly good heart to do it the way you have done it!hug
iamwhoiamyousee
lovely poem..to keep on searching and then..when last expected to find the answer..it is like that with a lot of things..love included...

Iam
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