There once was a man who did live in a flask; The light which he saw looking up was all he who couldn't be bothered to question and ask could ever perceive: It was all he could see...
To wonder and question to him was a drag; The light which he saw was to him like the sun- and to ask or to think- an unbearable snag: It meant to give up what to him looked like fun.
His own little world was his womb and his dome, and leaving it was an unthinkable fate: "The universe outside my own little home is something for fools- and it is what I hate!"
Oblivious of the world outside his own, he spend his existence without any care while ignorant bliss was all he had known- an ignorant’s life he did live without dare.
And all the while he never noticed the flaw which he kept ignoring while living a lie: The world which he knew was all ever he saw- but never could rule it, until he would die.
The knowledge of what is inside your own flask is never enough to control your own life: To know what is outside is what you must ask- Or else you'll be ruled, in a world full of strife...
Hekamaat, i started reading thinking i'd get one of your very funny tales. instead i get rubbed by a genie of a bottle inside a box, never looking/seeing beyond his own locks. well penned quatrains friend! ;-)
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 5, 2011
Good guy was so right at first did not look passed the title thinking here comes the fun but its all wrapped in this title excellant PS it was fun to
Again!!!Joe! you fooled me!!! First I thought this would be like a lovely story of "genie" a cute girl in Aladdin's lamp... >___</// But it was a man in a flask!!!! LOL ^___^
A very good read though... Now I kind of love reading English a bit..lol (( been fooled by loads of your poems...lol ))
Hehe... You'll never know what kind of Genie lives in the lamp until you rub it! ...? ...?
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMar 5, 2011
This is very philosophic Hek. I too was expecting an amusing tale about Genies but what you have finished with is very sage advice. Thanks for sharing.
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But the poem is well penned and made a good read. Yes there was a genie in the bottle just not what I had expected
Again!!!Joe! you fooled me!!! First I thought this would be like a lovely story of "genie" a cute girl in Aladdin's lamp... >___</// But it was a man in a flask!!!! LOL ^___^
A very good read though... Now I kind of love reading English a bit..lol (( been fooled by loads of your poems...lol ))