lost and lonely

by Unknown

Apr 2011 611 Views 11 comments

lost and lonely

Author: Unknown

Sometimes I have all these crazy thoughts
I don't know if its me or not
I feel so alone no ones by my side
It feels way worse than if I died

Downward downward the spiral goes
There is no end to these lonesome woes
Just when you think it all has stopped
You scream so loud until your ears just pop

No one no one wants me around
They dropped me in the lost and found
Who really cares if I exsist
I hold the blade to both my wrists

Lost and lonely I choose to stay
I hope my luck will change today
But I know it wont cause I'm the same
Its me that is and I'm to blame

Tell me tell me is there more than this
I dream of you and then that kiss
Alone again who cares anymore
To share a dance out on the floor

Show me show me what I can do
Make me part of life with you
How'd cool it be to play the part
When someone calls you there sweetheart

I wished for you on this lonely night
Please tell me if the feelings right
I can't go on alone no more
I'm so lost and lonely right to the core

Silence silence it rules my brain
When I write these words of lonely pain
It takes you to a haunting place
Where there are eyes but no ones face

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Posted: Apr 2011

About this poem:

a time of sadness...and dark thoughts,from a poet that hurts all the time.

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Comments (11)

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAApr 3, 2011

Youre not alone brother...
It hurts so much sometimes,
You cant put it to word or rhyme,
Its the endless cycle of life,
It keeps you up in the middle of the night,
Its the last thing you want to see,
But thats all there is...,
What used to be...,
I feel for you and wish you rest,
I hope you find your happiness,
Bless you brother,
And may peace grow,
May hope and love follow wherever you go...
I feel the rain and feel your pain,
May you never go through that torture again...

dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAApr 3, 2011

SundaySilenceLittle Gasparilla, Florida USAApr 4, 2011

It seems like us poets are the best to express our feelings outright. Thanks for sharing...I definately can relate to what you are feeling on a daily basis. Blessed are the ones surrounded by love, but there are some of us who are definately set adrift.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaApr 4, 2011

We all sometimes have dark thoughts Dreamwolf but dont act on them because we know things will change for the better. If we cant find our kindred spirit then perhaps we need to look elsewhere. A secondary site brought me a very nice lady...after going thru a number of strange meetings and a few golddiggers.

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAApr 5, 2011

I agree with the handsome guy above me or Mr. BM!

(( gossip: Dreamwolf, do you think he(Mr. BM) looks like a DJ in a pub? lol))

Anyway, I think this poem sounds like a song lyric more than a poem! and I liked it! ^_______^ esp, the following lines:

I wished for you on this lonely night
Please tell me if the feelings right
I can't go on alone no more
I'm so lost and lonely right to the core

I can sing it!! No joking!!! When I read it, I already have a melody for it, N I sang it!

and I've realized that I wasn't born to be a singer. -_-''

lol

However, I liked this !! I do! I did! I liked it a lot.( hate grammar -_-''

what should I say? I'm blur) lol Thank you so much for sharing this and keep being sad ok? cus when you're happy I may not have a chance to read a very good sad poem like this .

:p Kidding....

Be happy! and even if I liked this lovely sad poem so much but I'm looking fwd to reading your happy lovely poem too!!!

Cheers!!

dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAApr 5, 2011

thanks for your comments,boyscharm6-thesunandthesea...

i'll be okay,and yes i'll keep writing out my darkest thoughts,its just a part of whom i am,until i can find my angel of life..i will continue to bleed from the wound of the knife.

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAApr 5, 2011

maybe you need a giant -> ( _¯:_¯:_¯:_¯[_¯ _¯]_¯:_¯:_¯:_¯ ) to stop bleeding and to mend a ->

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAApr 5, 2011

( _¯:_¯:_¯:_¯ ) I tried to make a giant plaster/tape for you. -_-'' but it didnt work.. sorry.

moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 5, 2011

I am lifting you up in my thoughts dreamwolf. to a place where you can see.Love is all around you and for you.Love your space and you will see.You have dropped yourself in the lost but you will be found.(I do connect with your beautiful sad poem) Do cheer up.