If you dream a dream and turn to dream it again you awaken to the memory of a vision seen then! When you don’t expect it the image will be there re-appearing in different disguises, everywhere! An echo of a sleeping world out of waking reach a forlorn desire of something you can’t breach! The mirrored images of what you see will seem like sad reflections, of a dream within a dream!
The mind will not let a heart’s emotions keep nagging from within with no respect for sleep! In the seaming knowledge of a religious light might simply be the refuge of an inner plight! Within the fine balance of each person’s brain the secrets of what makes them sane, or insane! When we surrender to strong emotions we seem spiritually trapped, in a dream within a dream!
Time has no place as the imagery stays with you in it’s multiple variations in the state of Déjà vu! You’re conscious of no colour to each revelation just shades of grey shape your persistent vision! Yet you hope on the day you take your last breath you will find rainbow spirits in the truth of death! Perhaps though death is not what it might seem and all you view is but a dream within a dream!
dear poet sonofadam, a poet cannot stop writing and react. words are not from your own heart, but its from grom the God's help. for me as a new one in writing in english, your poems helping me to know more good words and usage. i like its pattern of words. thanks for the share and thoughts. sabeel.
sonofadamOPSwindon, Wiltshire, England UKSep 3, 2009
Dear gypsyheart-Thank you so much but I fear you flatter me beyond the bounds of my ability-still-I will delay my departure from this part of the site-take care-Ken-sonofadam:-)
sonofadamOPSwindon, Wiltshire, England UKSep 3, 2009
My Dear Sabeel-You are such an honest and thoughtful man and I am so proud of your sincere comments, but I'm afraid you misunderstood what I meant, I did not say I would stop writing, only that I would stop posting my poetry on this site:-) Now I will delay that decision for maybe another six poems, we shall see-thank you again-take care-Ken-sonofadam:-)
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 4, 2009
Your a born poet sonofadam with the gift for writing.Glad to hear we will see a little more of your poems
sonofadamOPSwindon, Wiltshire, England UKSep 5, 2009
Just for you gypsyheart:-)
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 5, 2009
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i noticed that , the usage of words are beautiful.
thank you,
sabeel.
a poet cannot stop writing and react.
words are not from your own heart, but its from grom the God's help.
for me as a new one in writing in english, your poems helping me to know more good words and usage.
i like its pattern of words.
thanks for the share and thoughts.
sabeel.
Now I will delay that decision for maybe another six poems, we shall see-thank you again-take care-Ken-sonofadam:-)