The Bright Red Train

The Bright Red Train

With unbelieving eyes, though it was a glorious day,
I saw a bright red train quickly pass along my way.
At the very first sight of it, the likes I’ve never seen,
I couldn’t help but wonder where the hell’s it been?
It wasn’t until later I thought, where will it now go,
I think I should have followed, now I’ll never know!

sonofadam:-)
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Posted: Sep 2009

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Autumn47
Dear Sonofadam: I enjoyed this and looked you up on your profile, and tried to communicate with you through email - but you will not to be disturbed this way. Now you will never know where the hell I've been and I think you should open your mail, so you will not have to live with another regret. Autumn47
sonofadam
Dear Autumn47-I'm glad you enjoyed my short and true poem but I don't understand why you could not e-mail me! Please try again though I remind you that I live in England-Take care-Ken:-)
moonlove
That pretty much sad poem, but i enjoy to read your poem, good!!beer
gypsyheart
Really good poem sonofadam-puts a smile on my face :)hug
sonofadam
Thank you moonlove and gypsyheart-glad to put a smile on your face:-)
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Oh I loved it. Will never look at a train the same again. Will always wonder where is it going.teddybear
Redex
Loved this. Lesson learnt, always follow red trainsrolling on the floor laughing
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