With unbelieving eyes, though it was a glorious day, I saw a bright red train quickly pass along my way. At the very first sight of it, the likes I’ve never seen, I couldn’t help but wonder where the hell’s it been? It wasn’t until later I thought, where will it now go, I think I should have followed, now I’ll never know!
Dear Sonofadam: I enjoyed this and looked you up on your profile, and tried to communicate with you through email - but you will not to be disturbed this way. Now you will never know where the hell I've been and I think you should open your mail, so you will not have to live with another regret. Autumn47
sonofadamOPSwindon, Wiltshire, England UKSep 8, 2009
Dear Autumn47-I'm glad you enjoyed my short and true poem but I don't understand why you could not e-mail me! Please try again though I remind you that I live in England-Take care-Ken:-)
moonlovechiang mai, Northern Thailand ThailandSep 8, 2009
That pretty much sad poem, but i enjoy to read your poem, good!!
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 9, 2009
Really good poem sonofadam-puts a smile on my face :)
sonofadamOPSwindon, Wiltshire, England UKSep 12, 2009
Thank you moonlove and gypsyheart-glad to put a smile on your face:-)
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