Evertime I look at you I see, Every wish and hope and dream, I've ever had.. dangled right before my eyes.. close enough that I can almost grasp it.. Yet elusive like the butterfly, like snow on the mountain top.. It's always been just out of my reach..
When I look into your eyes i can see, Every single dream I've ever dreamed before.. So close to reality, So close that I can almost reach out and touch it.. And if I dared, Ijust know I'd have the world in the palm of my hands again..
And if I let my guard down, If I take this chance with you.. Will I regret it, No I don't think so.. Because I see in you...
A heart so gentle and so true.. A love that's unconditional.. Someone I can give my whole heart to.. Someone that won't throw it all away, Someone, who won't make me afraid, To tell all my wishes, hopes and dreams to.. Someone.. Someone like you.
Julian1963Merthy Tydfil, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 25, 2012
And if I let my guard down, If I take this chance with you.. Will I regret it, No I don't think so.. Because I see in you...
This was your ninth poem which I think tells a story. Well I am going to take a chance on you with STORMY WEATHER which runs in exactly 2 hours and if you go here you can get the commentry to see if youre a winner. Win or lose you are my winner!
Julian1963Merthy Tydfil, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 25, 2012
I am one of these people who activly seek out signs from God. Its a pastime of mine.I could tell you so many things but to some would sound science fiction. Anyway the sport of kings interest me very much. I am really wondering now the meaning of the sign!!! Are you my Queen ? Am I your king ? I think the answer may lie in the 2nd race below.....all I can say is.come on JULIAN !!!!
Julian1963Merthy Tydfil, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 25, 2012
Oh well you nearly won- 2nd. Not sure what it means now perhaps something to do with Paloma67 who made a comment on my One Good Family poem where she says, "We all need to take my poem as a CUE to ponder on the gift of ever lasting life".It could mean everlating life with you as you were in the middle between Palawi and Cue to Cue Are you a posh bird ? Well I do hope you find your king one day but its not Julian he came almost last. Anyway you are my winner in poetry, I enjoy them all..
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this is really very very beautifully touching just love it.....
removed and vulnerable. Great wording
and phrasing also!
If I take this chance with you..
Will I regret it,
No I don't think so..
Because I see in you...
This was your ninth poem which I think tells a story. Well I am going to take a chance on you with STORMY WEATHER which runs in exactly 2 hours and if you go here you can get the commentry to see if youre a winner. Win or lose you are my winner!
Its a pastime of mine.I could tell you so many things but to some would sound science fiction.
Anyway the sport of kings interest me very much.
I am really wondering now the meaning of the sign!!!
Are you my Queen ?
Am I your king ?
I think the answer may lie in the 2nd race below.....all I can say is.come on JULIAN !!!!
Are you a posh bird ? Well I do hope you find your king one day but its not Julian he came almost last.
Anyway you are my winner in poetry, I enjoy them all..