I'm doing fine Maybe I'll find love in time Doing alright Driving away on a satyrday night Tunes cranked up high Gotta pass the time on bye
You pick up your feet A railroad crossing over the street Your chin up high How does it feel just to be alive Lookin good Do I care if I really should
Driving away She throws a smile that points my way Feeling alright Driving alone on a saturday night You step on the gas Just to watch the world go fast
These crazy dreams Its really not as bad as it seems This can't be beat When your in control at the drivers seat Shift through the gears My thoughts wander in search of fear
You hold yourself Another soul put on a shelf Is it fear My heart is racing I feel so scared I'll drive all night To race away from the morning light
The tunes are loud Like thunder trembling from a cloud Lift up your feet Gotta adjust the drivers seat I pick up the pace The rearview mirror reveals a pretty face
I coast on down I turn the knob that controls the sound Been driving all night? She says I'm your shadow tonight Just follow me And let what will be,will be
I'm doin fine Knowing now that she will be mine She stares me down She smiles and wants the seat way down This is fast! My foots not even on the gas
I adjust the seat A wild ride on the drivers seat I lost my rhyme When I awoke it was morning time No more clothes She took them with her I guess I suppose.
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
i wrote this one while paddling around in my kayak....now you know why they call me dreamwolf...it would make a great song..right?
It would make a good song and is a great poem. Driving or kayaking has its own rhythm and I kinda got lost is the suspense, netherworld kind of feeling you poem let me to. TY
dreamwolf5264OPfrancestown, New Hampshire USAJul 31, 2011
yeah i hear ya b.c. i had the idea in my head while on a long drive back home from a brewpub
Comments (4)
Driving or kayaking has its own rhythm and
I kinda got lost is the suspense, netherworld
kind of feeling you poem let me to. TY