"The Rose and the Weed"

I, as a twig, placed upon healthy ground,
was then covered with good soil and sand.
Appearing as one 'dead', indeed profound
that some future day I'd beautify the land!

While covered with earth secure and warm,
no fears nor fret for some weeks to come.
As I patiently laid there, as one to be born,
to a bright new life,... yet feared by one.

Tis the weed that's born with trembling fear
as it's fragile life is considered but waste.
But as a 'ROSE', my life is indeed secure,
since by few am I of intolerable taste.

As I grow, I receive a gardener's best care,
while the poor weed is simply cut & burned.
Tis sad to see the poor weed tremble there,
as he fears rejection and mankind's spurn.

For weeks by the shivering weed I laid,
not much different from him indeed,
But once my grower distinction has made,
Tis "Welcome Rose" and "Good-bye weed!"

It's sad in losing a close familiar friend,
that grew abreast my very own side.
But worse than that, the fatal end,
of the life of one who desperately tried,

For all his worth to be his very best,
in blossom and in gorgeous bloom.
As by my side poor weed grew abreast
the one who sealed his certain doom.

A 'ROSE' indeed, in full glorious array,
with all my gleaming splendor shown.
Yet sad I am each long remorseful day,
for the horrible end of one I've known.

Who by my side through sun and rain,
and the fiercest weather's beaten test,
did not so much as groan nor complain,
but offered to me sweet comforting rest.

As shade he offered in hot summer sun,
and strength against stiff blowing wind.
My dear friend the weed will be the one,
of whose un-forgotten grave I'll send,

A fragrant bouquet composed of 'ME',
as a tribute to my dear faithful friend.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
One day while pondering the thought and possibility of plants 'thinking and speaking'... I came up with this poem. It's meant to be an analogy of the way people's lives can sometimes be compared to one another. Success vs failure, popular vs unpopular, accepted vs the outcasts. May it cause us all to be a bit more compassionate and sensitive to those around us who may appear to be less fortunate in life's circumstances.

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Comments (25)

hedistuff
only a masterpiece of work...well done swade!!!
swade777
A first comment that already has me feeling blushed and undeserving!! Thank you so much!! cheers Have a cold root beer on me!!
hedistuff
actually, it is far better than I've proclaimed....
swade777
Hedistuff, thank you sir!!!! That is so very kind of you to add an additional uplifting comment.cheers cheers cheers I may just empty my fridge of root beer with you!! head banger
swade777
Cafe, you're the greatest in clever deliveries!! I wish we'd have known each other at age 10.... the world would certainly be a better place had that happened!! (Or maybe not??) confused

Thank you kind counselor for your words of praise!!! Always a blessing to see you on board!! handshake cheers
jeddah12
wow,,this such a beautiful poem sir..you delivered it so well.
fantastic tribute to a flowers friend,,sad flower thumbs up
swade777
Thank you miss Jeddah!! I love the profile photo of you and your tiger friend! (Is that your alter ego or do you just have a love for tigers?) confused

An appreciated praise for my work.... Thank you! I'm humbled and much grateful at the same time!teddybear bouquet
jeddah12
iam crazy over animals swade,an animal lover,,this creatures just amazes me no matter what kind of animals they are,i just love them...i dont know how to explain it in a short way to you sir...i have 4 dogs with me here at home,they are my kids,,3 fish tank w/different type of fish with 6 rabbitsgrin
all well train about their hygine,,,so i tell you,my house is a minizoo,,,grin
swade777
Jeddah, bring that tiger home with you and your zoo will be made even more mini as he enjoys your plethora of pets as well!!
I too have 4 large dogs! Also a cat, some Rainbow Trout that live in my 2 ponds, as well wild birds to numerous to count that I feed daily. I too enjoy the company of fur, feather and fin bearing creatures!! Nice to know that there are other's out there that share in the gift of companionship that animals seem to know how to do just perfectly!! We should learn from them don't you think? dunno I think so!!
Redex
Swade a master peice I loved this.
The mighty weed can give us allusions of granduer, but we all need each other, what is a rose without its thorn so to speak.teddybear
niah9
Great write swade....all the praise already noted.....niahapplause teddybear
Odette67
Such an imaginative poem Swade. cheers
Fellsman
Hi Swade

A wonderful allegorical narrative, previous commentators have said it all... a sublime write.

Bill cheers
swade777
Mr. Fellsman, thank you so very much sir! As already stated, your particular comments always mean a lot to me as I look to you as a teacher and I your student! You sir, are a true poet!! Thanks for your encouragement!!
swade777
Reddex, Niah, Oddette, talk about 'ROSES' beautifying the branch upon which they display their beauty.... let's just say that I'm pleased beyond descriptive words to be serving as that 'branch' in acknowledging the three of you here together at once. Thank you all for your sweet fragrance of perfume upon my particular 'weedy' piece of work!! hug hug hug
swade777
sorry Redex and Odette about doubling the 'D''s on both your names.... must be thinking about 'something' in double D's???? wink
pilgrimageoflove
A beautiful perpective
A great poem
cheers
boyshchrm6
Nice tribute to the less fortunate
that are sometimes a rock for others.
thumbs up comfort angel cool
swade777
Thank you Pilgramage for your kindness of both reading and commenting so nicely upon my poem!
swade777
Boyscharm, I'm glad that you picked up on the analogy that I tried to convey in my poem through Roses and Weeds and how people's lives are often lived in the same manner with one another. Thank you for your supportive comments!!
Odette67
Your comments Swade, are fast becoming poems in their own right..cheers wave
swade777
My dear Odette, your sweet comment has set
my mind a wanderin fer a way,
To express sincerest of thanks without regret
for all the sweet things that you say!!

You're a real sweety!!!!
hug sad flower
paloma66
Excellent poem Swade.thumbs up handshake bouquet
swade777
Hi there Paloma66!! Thank you so very much for your kind comment! If I'm not mistaken, aren't you one of the fortunate one's to have met your soul mate, significant other, man of your dreams.... on this site? Seems that I recall some comment exchanges in the past year about such a success story related to you? If so... CONGRATULATIONS!!! If I'm mistaken, please allow some forgiving spirit to be applied to my assumption. In any respect, thanks again for your sweet words regarding my poem. hug
Odette67
Dear Swade, I just noticed your comment. Many thanks teddybear Oh what the heck, here is a lips too.
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