"TIME"

It begins at our birth,
waging war against life,
making fast it's girth,
planting seeds of strife.

No weapon of man,
can halt it's advance,
no thwarting it's plan,
no escaping by chance.

It's force is ever growing,
appearance non-descript,
there is no power in knowing,
no cure to be prescript.

Soldiers quite minute in size,
seem harmless in their cause,
ever increasing before our eyes,
ever sharpening deceptive claws.

Claws of 'time' destroying us,
as each mission is performed,
reducing forms of life to dust,
health to illness transformed.

Absent of form the eye to see,
yet known by familiar names,
seconds, minutes, hours and weeks,
assembling - all lives to claim.

Time gives a sense of safe abode,
to those with their heads in sand,
to those who refuse to see it's mode,
of deteriorating the life of man.

God, the maker of this thing - 'time',
allows it to run it's unfailing course,
it's original purpose - quite sublime,
but man in Eden refashioned its force.

'Time', yet needed for life to thrive,
a strange gift delivered from above,
no longer able to keep us here, alive,
but able to usher to timeless love.

This enemy-'time' can be used for good,
if wisdom prevails in God given minds,
don't simply say you would if you could,
when able to control the destiny of time!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
I just recently considered the concept of 'time' being like an invisible army or foe - always mounting it's forces against us to ultimately destroy us.... this is how I fashioned it into poetic verse.

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Yankee4you
Hey Swade, I like how you equate characteristics of time here since it made me think I suppose about how people have been worrying about a future since an original doomsday theory was first derived....seesm like a common thread throughout most cultures...
swade777
Hey Yankee! Thanks for the comment and the time you've given to reading 'TIME'! handshake
steve1223
In my minds eye I could see the army of time marching against us....nice descriptive write

cheers cheers
Fellsman
Hi John

A very thought provoking narrative, you have also written with great attention to rhyme, a really fine poem...

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
solong
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swade777
Steve, I'm honored to see you reading and commenting on both of my recent posts! Thank you!
swade777
Bill.... I always anticipate your comments and seek your wisdom and encouragement as being one that I greatly respect and admire as MY favorite poet - EVER!! Thank you sir for your encouraging and supportive words!
swade777
Solong.... the 5 warm and fuzzy - kiss throwing bears have made my day!!!! They are almost as attractive as you are!!! Thank you!! hug
Maxeen_1
Swade a wonderful thinkers write luved it ..A1 kudoshandshake thumbs up gift
Time gives a sense of safe abode,
to those with their heads in sand,
to those who refuse to see it's mode,
of deteriorating the life of man.
handshake thumbs up gift
adjhe
I have been in the military during war and i got that feeling like time was marching against me. This is very well written i appreciate your poetry. Keep it up.dancing head banger
lucy1777
This is a nice poem swade I really like the line GOD,the maker of this thing,,allows it to run its unfailing course. Wonderfully put my friend!handshake
swade777
It's so nice to be back in the company of such wonderful people!!! Maxeen, adjhe and Lucy.... Hugs to all three of you for such wonderful, supportive comments to my poem. I've just recently signed up as a competitor for a local poetry competition and I'm considering using this poem "TIME" as my entry. My other thought was to use the poem I wrote titled: "Four Little Letters". If any of you would like to share your thoughts or comments about which may be my best piece.... please let me know!! The contest entries have to be in by Mar. 30th. Thanks again for all the wonderful support from all you great poets and lovers of poetry!!!
seawhisper
Swade777 I've read this poem as many have. I read the four little letters too. Both of which were enjoyed very much by me, although it is a close call on which I would choose for a poetry entry. This TIME being the one I would decide to choose for the competition as there is so many issues and incidents around the world. I feel this is a powerful and poignant write on many scales. Good look...grin cheers peace
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