"And my son is just like me!"

Little would I know as I watched him grow, 
that my blue eyed son would be just like me.
The visions within his eye, his restraints to cry, 
determined to excel and live his life well.
Like my father's son, my youngest is the one, 
with actions of stealth serving others not self.
He's considerate, he's true, patriotic thru & thru, 
like feet properly shod, he's protected by God.
And my son is just like me!

At the age of 11 my son sent from heaven, 
by the One I extol took him in full control.
My time to preach and my years to teach, 
like summer's cool swim came to a difficult end.
He was moved far away from me to stay, 
as my unhappy wife sought out a brighter life. 
Five long years of silent fallen tears, 
before my 16 year old, my arms would hold.
And my son is just like me!

Now at 18 he's back and our lives are on track, 
and my son and his dad are both so glad.
He's a man to the core my college Sophomore, 
and a prouder than me Dad could never be had.
Now it's up to 'US' in love and trust,
to keep ties strong through right or wrong.
The exciting years ahead, to him I've said, 
could be our very best, if trusted to God to bless.

"And my son is just like me!"
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
I've been BLESSED to have time with my 18 year old son over the past 2 weeks as he's enjoying a summer break before going back to his college Sophomore year. He's working with me and showing me just why I'm so proud of him!! He'll be gone to soon, but I'm soaking up as much enjoyment from his time as I possibly can!..... and.... he's just like me!! :-)

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Comments (17)

CloudySky
hug I can feel the excitement and love in every word. Sounds like he is growing up to be a wonderful man! Enjoy each moment.
Ahyra
Nice to read Swade, I can see you are very proud of your son, and that he is very lucky to have a father like you. bouquet
paloma66
Its good to know God blessed you by bringing him back to you,may God keep you both bound in the bonds of love.thumbs up hug hug purple heart
Redex
Enjoy enjoy your time together he is part of you swade so no matter what he will see the good side in all.teddybear
jeddah12
thumbs up applause this is a very touching feeling of a proud dad and god bless you bro...enjoy all the time with him and he will be back again to be with you...very nice sharing and bless you both..ty..how i wish my son is as close like that,,but we are just to cool and best friends,,,mom is too way cool and he is a man,,,but loving and kind as well,,he is just like me toogrin handshake angel
orientalkoru
father and son - the bond, the love, the faith, the dedication, the pride...beautiful sentiments, beautiful poem...bouquet
Ladybee42
Of course he's like you, who did you think he would be like?laugh
Sons that live all of their childhood and teenage years under their father's roof tend to put so much energy into not growing into their father, but it's wasted energy for the most part and they are middle aged with children of their own when they realise that for better or worse they are indeed their father's son.
I'm so happy for you to have this wonderful time with your son Swade, doesn't it fill your heart with joy in the pleasure of it all? Lovely poem you've written from the heart.

thumbs up purple heart purple heart
mcradloff
Good for you, enjoy your time with him.cheers buddies
swade777
I feel like 'my family' just showed up for a quick re-union to share in the joyous moment with my son's visit! WoW! You're all such wonderful, inspiring people and I'm blessed to be a part of Poet's Corner - off and on as it has to be... it's nice to know that I'm always welcome back when time allows for it! Keep the Spirit Alive!!! Hugs and handshakes to all of you!!!!! hug handshake
Fellsman
Hi Swade

A poem to raise the spirits and make us realise that whatever tribulations may come our way, there are (from time-to-time) blessings to.

You appear to be especially blessed to have such a wonderful and loving son.

Great write buddy...

Bill wine
Fellsman
My spelling must be getting rusty John, that of course should have read blessings too.

Bill wine
Odette67
Now it's up to 'US' in love and trust,
to keep ties strong through right or wrong.
The exciting years ahead, to him I've said,
could be our very best, if trusted to God to bless.

"And my son is just like me!"


Dear Swade,

Your extreme joy is palpable in this beautiful dedication to a Son you love dearly. teddybear purple heart
windyweatherly
Our dear friend I m mighty glad you are back.

Yes our feelings and relationship with our children carry either the heaviest burden or provide us the greatest enlightenment. Pride is the pinnacle of our achievement.

I am so happy for you.

Windy
bjallen
such a wonderfull thing to see the growth of a child and feel secure in the fact that they will be great adults.
jazzy75
What a wonderful feeling! ENJOY!peace hug
Kelsey1989
Lovely poem in dedication to your pride in your son!!! applause
Madelyn102030
"he's back and our lives are on track"

That is such a FEELING to have after time apart. I know this too well also.
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