I Am Hate ((WARNING...not nice !!))

I Am Hate

I am Hate.
The very name pulls life from your lungs,
as you exhale to speak the word.
Hate
I am the spit that rides on your razor words.
That extra push that breaks through the rib cage.
The hand that strikes the tear stain cheaks.
I am the feeling after the fire, the father of rage.
Know me, I am Hate
I am the smerk on his face,
when you were only a child.
I am the sounds that drowned,
your screams for help.
I am every ripped pair of panties,
and blood stained rope.
I am simple, I am Hate.
I am the dirt in the lungs,
and the flesh under the nail.
I am the thousands of gallons of water,
that blanket your ravaged body.
I am the lie that hides the truth.
The shark in the lake, out of place, and all alone.
I am the dinasour too big to be swallowed
by the tar pit in the back of your mind.
I am forever and I am everywhere
I am Hate
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
I just wanted to share this poem and a few others that touched different subjects and emotions...
With this poem I wanted to see what you all thought when i'm not writing about love, but yet the opposite...Hate.

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amahlala
Very bleak and stark and yet it will probably hit home for a lot people...me included...feeling the hate that was directed towards..good way to let it go. Thankshandshake
MrAnonymous
Very good! thumbs up

My ONLY dislike was the word "dinasour" seemed slightly 'out of theme' and somehow seemed to take away from the feeling of the poem. It serves it's purpose well, just kind of too 'sciencey'...then again, I am no scholar. Just know that I liked the rest of it enough to reply.

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Blizza801
Thank you for reading...and I appreciate the constructive criticism thank you !!
trurorob
We take what we want from it Blizza801,
They will not like it, because of the subject, me I get a feel of more mean and cruel than hate, but we all read things differently, thats the beauty of poetry
Rob
Sunnn
I love this poem. So deep. Stricking.

Agreed, word dinosaur distracts because we take dinosaures as something cute. People who met them would not agree with us but.


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gypsyheart
Very well expressed Blizza-yeah hate is a strong emotion that can imprison the spirithug
Blizza801
Thanks !!...I will work on the dinosaur
lookylou
I like the poem.
Strangely, the image of the dinasaur came through well because I grew up near the tar-pits and have a stronge memory of the size of those creatures. I was fascinated by them, scared and intrigued.
bapsineurope
wow this was a very intense piece and I enjoyed it very much it brought up so many images as I read each word, it really sent chills down my spine...and leave dinasour in my opinion it spoke what it meant to be about hate and how huge it can be....thank you for sharing...
NeverEndingStory
Your poem goes beyond the boundaries of hate. Sometimes hate just isn't the right word, the same as love. I've heard the sayings in general conversation between loved ones. I love you, I hate you. Just words to me. I really believer there is an emotion beyond love and hate that there will never be words to describe how someone feels when they are hurt so badly that they never recover or loose a loved one to mindless killing. My thoughts anyway. Good poem TY for sharing teddybear
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