I Am Hate ((WARNING...not nice !!))
Author: Unknown
I Am Hate
I am Hate.
The very name pulls life from your lungs,
as you exhale to speak the word.
Hate
I am the spit that rides on your razor words.
That extra push that breaks through the rib cage.
The hand that strikes the tear stain cheaks.
I am the feeling after the fire, the father of rage.
Know me, I am Hate
I am the smerk on his face,
when you were only a child.
I am the sounds that drowned,
your screams for help.
I am every ripped pair of panties,
and blood stained rope.
I am simple, I am Hate.
I am the dirt in the lungs,
and the flesh under the nail.
I am the thousands of gallons of water,
that blanket your ravaged body.
I am the lie that hides the truth.
The shark in the lake, out of place, and all alone.
I am the dinasour too big to be swallowed
by the tar pit in the back of your mind.
I am forever and I am everywhere
I am Hate
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
I just wanted to share this poem and a few others that touched different subjects and emotions...
With this poem I wanted to see what you all thought when i'm not writing about love, but yet the opposite...Hate.
Comments (10)
My ONLY dislike was the word "dinasour" seemed slightly 'out of theme' and somehow seemed to take away from the feeling of the poem. It serves it's purpose well, just kind of too 'sciencey'...then again, I am no scholar. Just know that I liked the rest of it enough to reply.
They will not like it, because of the subject, me I get a feel of more mean and cruel than hate, but we all read things differently, thats the beauty of poetry
Rob
Agreed, word dinosaur distracts because we take dinosaures as something cute. People who met them would not agree with us but.
Great Talent!
Strangely, the image of the dinasaur came through well because I grew up near the tar-pits and have a stronge memory of the size of those creatures. I was fascinated by them, scared and intrigued.