Summer Love ...

Will summer's love transcend
Or will it fade like the last red pale rose.
Clinging to the bush..
Destined to die a slow and lonely death..

Can summer's love reach beyond the supple green branches
full of life and hope
To the crumpled dying burnt orange
leaves lying on the ground..

Can summer love survive ..
The cold dreary November rain..
Can summer love linger
Through autumn's dreary night..

Will the heady scent that lingered
through summer's majestic reign,
Fly away with the birds, or will it remain,
And see us through autumn,s cold dark past.
And can it last..
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Posted: Sep 2009

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Comments (26)

poetengineer
simpley , it beautiful poem . i enjoy read it , it have a lot of deep feelings , thanks for share it
teddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks Poetengineer for your kind comments.. Your kind words are always appreciated, by me... hug teddybear
Sunnn
teddybear teddybear teddybear teddybear teddybear bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet
trurorob
Lovely poem Quietstormf
But for me I feel that summers love never lasts, it fades like the rose, probably because some of us dont work hard enough at it, but no matter how well you tend the rose, it will fade
Rob
fareaway
quiet storm
thankyou for colours beautifully merged
blessings
angel bouquet teddybear
gypsyheart
Beautifully written again dear QuietStormFbouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you Sunn..bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you Rob.. Time will tell.. The rose may fade... but then along comes Spring! Cheers! bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks again Gypsyheart.. hug
boyshchrm6
Beautiful words and phrases.
Tender and also sad the uncertainty.angel thumbs up hug
QuietStormF
Thank-u Larry... and nothing is certain but death and taxes...laugh hug teddybear
PassionateArtist
! I Love This =Po=em !
paloma66
Beautiful poem QuieStorm,gentle as a summer breeze that soothes in summer.May you be blessed.hug bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you Passionatepoet... I am glad you liked it.. teddybear bouquet hug
freeatlast64847
How to make love stay, that's the key... Kudos! wine
QuietStormF
Thanks so much paloma66.. I wrote this when I was really uncertain .. and didnt know quite where it was going... It did last.. through last fall... but this one? I don't think it did.. or will... yeh kind of sad... sad flower teddybear bouquet
molly1959
this is truly beautiful, made me weep
xxxx
Redex
Bottle it thats the way beautiful love poem to be preservedteddybear
QuietStormF
Yhank-you Passionate Artist.. I am happy you liked the poem! applause teddybear
QuietStormF
paloma66 Thank-you so much for your comments... and may you be blessed as well my friend! hug teddybear bouquet
HotrodLarrys
There is allways a Bright side of the Moon,
many time we have to wait for the Moon to Change...
Until then Stay positive and Content...
And the Dream will Shine from the Sky
QuietStormF
Thanks .. freeatlast... How to make love stay... indeed...many books are written, but ya know, what is meant to be will always find a way......... yeh? lol I, think so........teddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks Hotrod larry .. and I do belive that you are right on hereapplause teddybear
Flesh750
The summer love is always there,it may end at the end of the summer, but stays burning in your heart, a burn that will be shared through your memories. Let the winter freez, what was started and let the spring begain the next chapter....great write, loved it!teddybearteddybear bouquet
boyshchrm6
Forgot how truly poignant this truly is QS.
Reminds me of several phrases in summer love songs when
I was a teenager. "trees swaying in the summer wind"
"listen to the rythm of the falling rain"
"along with them they took my heart"
"and dreams of you"
angel comfort sad flower
lonewolf1962
WOW!!!!
I just love the way that you word your peoms!!!!teddybear kiss hug heart wings heart wings
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