Will summer's love transcend Or will it fade like the last red pale rose. Clinging to the bush.. Destined to die a slow and lonely death..
Can summer's love reach beyond the supple green branches full of life and hope To the crumpled dying burnt orange leaves lying on the ground..
Can summer love survive .. The cold dreary November rain.. Can summer love linger Through autumn's dreary night..
Will the heady scent that lingered through summer's majestic reign, Fly away with the birds, or will it remain, And see us through autumn,s cold dark past. And can it last..
Lovely poem Quietstormf But for me I feel that summers love never lasts, it fades like the rose, probably because some of us dont work hard enough at it, but no matter how well you tend the rose, it will fade Rob
fareawayhyderabad, Telangana IndiaSep 25, 2009
quiet storm thankyou for colours beautifully merged blessings
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 25, 2009
Thanks so much paloma66.. I wrote this when I was really uncertain .. and didnt know quite where it was going... It did last.. through last fall... but this one? I don't think it did.. or will... yeh kind of sad...
molly1959Gauteng, South AfricaNov 11, 2010
this is truly beautiful, made me weep xxxx
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 11, 2010
Bottle it thats the way beautiful love poem to be preserved
There is allways a Bright side of the Moon, many time we have to wait for the Moon to Change... Until then Stay positive and Content... And the Dream will Shine from the Sky
Thanks .. freeatlast... How to make love stay... indeed...many books are written, but ya know, what is meant to be will always find a way......... yeh? lol I, think so........
Thanks Hotrod larry .. and I do belive that you are right on here
Flesh750stevens Point, Wisconsin USANov 16, 2010
The summer love is always there,it may end at the end of the summer, but stays burning in your heart, a burn that will be shared through your memories. Let the winter freez, what was started and let the spring begain the next chapter....great write, loved it!
Forgot how truly poignant this truly is QS. Reminds me of several phrases in summer love songs when I was a teenager. "trees swaying in the summer wind" "listen to the rythm of the falling rain" "along with them they took my heart" "and dreams of you"
lonewolf1962Odessa, Ontario CanadaMar 9, 2011
WOW!!!! I just love the way that you word your peoms!!!!
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But for me I feel that summers love never lasts, it fades like the rose, probably because some of us dont work hard enough at it, but no matter how well you tend the rose, it will fade
Rob
thankyou for colours beautifully merged
blessings
Tender and also sad the uncertainty.
xxxx
many time we have to wait for the Moon to Change...
Until then Stay positive and Content...
And the Dream will Shine from the Sky
Reminds me of several phrases in summer love songs when
I was a teenager. "trees swaying in the summer wind"
"listen to the rythm of the falling rain"
"along with them they took my heart"
"and dreams of you"
I just love the way that you word your peoms!!!!