Kick it's challenge (crooked fence)

A thousand steps, walking a crooked fence.
Where's the revalance, for my feet to transport such restlessness.
What's in sight, as I walk not knowing where I'm going.
Can't even see the light.
One thousand steps isn't long, just short of a mile. It's an eternity, in my mind can't waste any time.
I'd rather take a flight, and sore like a kite. Have to take these steps, haven't made it there yet. Wondering what I will find. " hoping for peace of mind". I'm not alone, these steps I cannot call my own.
Guidance is protecting me, as others take these steps with me.
Behold it's that crooked fence, staring back at me. I walked a thousand steps, how could this be? To come back to this crooked fence...why? What's it telling me?
" it's the story of my life". I've made it with strength and strive. Through all its curves and bends. A symbol of the past, & present to be.
A thousand steps, walking a crooked fence, has changed me....internally.
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Posted: Jul 2012

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windyweatherly
Cherrie my friend this is so awesome

I love it.

Thanks for sharing.

Phyllis
gnj4u
Hi, cherryreggae,
I've made it with strength and strive. Through all its curves and bends... With a strong voice, the poet tackles A thousand steps, walking a crooked fence.
jazzy75
A journey through the inside passages....nicely done cherryreggae.cool
swade777
Cherie.... you're DEEP!! I know there's a lot of SOUL being put forth in this write! It seems to almost be an autobiography in it's presented form. You're a huggable poet Cherie!!!! hug
Poetnumber1
You write from your soul and through your pen we see whats in your heart,this is jsut beautiful my friend and you met the challenge wellhug M.Mbouquet
cherryreggae
thank you phillis, your so sweet appreciate your kindness hug teddybear
cherryreggae
thank you phillis, your so sweet appreciate your kindness hug teddybear
Odette67
I've made it with strength and strive. Through all its curves and bends. A symbol of the past, & present to be.
A thousand steps, walking a crooked fence, has changed me....internally.

Written from deep in the soul...Excellent.hug purple heart
kickit22
hi cherry


indeed written from your soul, has changed me...internally.. inspiring, coming from a crooked fence..bouquet

kick..
cherryreggae
Thanks so much, gnj4u, jazzy, swade, poet, odette, & kick it.....ONELOVE!!!!!! Cherie...handshake cheers hug bouquet teddybear heart beating purple heart
CelticPoet12
Nice Cherryreggae. I enjoyed reading your work and pondering the message. Thanks for sharing and putting forth such an insightful reply to Kickit's challenge. applause
cherryreggae
Thanks so much celtic....truly appreciate ithug heart beating handshake
Yankee4you
Cherry.....wow!! This is really gripping....I really loved it!!! Just wonderful how you took this challenge and dove right into it....great write!!
cherryreggae
Much appreciated Yankee!!! Thankyoucheers handshake hug
CelticPoet12
Cherry R, you are MOST welcome!~wine
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