He spoke, he looked, he listened, and replied. But I did not know my true feeling, until he did the touch. A simple thing, that many would think as not being much. And when he reached to place his hand in mind, my heart began to glide.
What is this sense of touch that bleeds the heart of pressure. And gives release and joy and happiness to the heart and mind. My body does tingle with such pleasure, To think he is interested in a woman of my kind.
I am not rich, or beautiful, I do not have the poise. And yet when he took my hand. It settled all the searching noise. My mind calmed down, and for a time it employed The answer was so complete, for me he was the perfect man.
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
Going wild with poetry that night... due to creating things with pictures.. this was a man and a woman that were sitting and just touching... each other's hands... so sensual....
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 18, 2012
For a moment I really thought you are in LOVE!! Such is the intense attraction .so far you a poet most can relate to ..i tend to agree most of your poems ,they are not imagery but normal everyday themes .welcome to CS AND PC
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaJul 20, 2012
Hi Bythecoast,
It's true...a touch can convey things that words and other senses cannot compete. Nicely done.
Fascinating write...besides having the greatest concentration of nerve endings....our fingers have remarkable powers...just listen to the stories about Jesus and what he could do with one touch.....beautiful write....
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJul 20, 2012
What is this sense of touch that bleeds the heart of pressure. And gives release and joy and happiness to the heart and mind. My body does tingle with such pleasure, To think he is interested in a woman of my kind.
Comments (4)
It's true...a touch can convey things that words and other senses cannot compete. Nicely done.
And gives release and joy and happiness to the heart and mind.
My body does tingle with such pleasure,
To think he is interested in a woman of my kind.
Nice one