This is for my father Who was never there Who never even took a second To show how much he cared So he can just sit back And listen to what I have to say See I've made my mistakes And had a price to pay But never would I ever Do the things that you did And never would I ever Betray my own kid All the lies you've told All the secrets you've held I know that you wouldn't even care If I was burning in Hell But that's ok Because now it's all in the past And now when I look at you I sit back and I laugh And who would've thought I'd be in this situation Graduating from high school to jail And it's fifteen years that I'm facing I'm not gonna lie Sometimes I want to break down and cry Over one little mistake I end up losing my life And sometimes, dad, I think That if you would've been there Then maybe life at times Wouldn't seem so unfair But I've said all I can say Did all I could do I just hope you realize, one day This child belongs to you
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Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
For all you piece of shit fathers out there, this poem is dedicated to you. A child never has the option to be brought into this world and it's yours, mine, anyone's responsibility to show your child how much they mean to you. You never know what tomorrow holds...
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 21, 2009
thanks for share this honest feelings , as always u have bright thoughts
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 28, 2009
Powerfully expressed Dementia.Thank you for sharing
RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 28, 2009
I dont Know how someone cant love what is a part of them, surely they must hate themselves?? There reward will be a hell.
I surely believe each one of us, even with a struggle, can change the ropes of upbringing. I wish you peace
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 7, 2010
Dementia
How many children would relate to that? Plenty, I am sure. Brilliant Pilgrim
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 8, 2010
very well penned and an excellent way of expressing such feeling sad but true and i wish those fathers who dont have heart will gonna read this,well done dementia and may god bless you always with a good life
Great write about something so personal to you and yet so familiar to many. Thanks for sharing
gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandNov 8, 2010
powerful, yet restrained emotion, you are not your father, that is your victory, surely, lovely written piece, dementia.
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 8, 2010
from the mind-jukebox: daddy gave me a name, and then he walked away - everclear dementia...a painful read, but a moving piece. bravo...for saying what needed said. and needs to be said for so many who can't find the voice or words.
Thank you for your comment Poet. Great thing about free will is that we can choose our own path. Glad you liked it
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USANov 9, 2012
This is both very sad and very enlightening at the same time. Sad because of the abandonment and being left out for the most needed love as a child by the one that is expected to love you and yet it is very enlightening as the brilliance on the line of your thought is the sound of forgiveness you have expressed and knowing the difference. Good luck and may God Bless you Dementia as also to your father and perhaps there will come a time when change will effect to him...
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There reward will be a hell.
I surely believe each one of us, even with a struggle, can change the ropes of upbringing. I wish you peace
How many children would relate to that? Plenty, I am sure.
Brilliant
Pilgrim
dementia...a painful read, but a moving piece. bravo...for saying what needed said. and needs to be said for so many who can't find the voice or words.
thank you for sharing..