my submission...

This heart can't wait
to fall right in
and these words,
hope that they will sink in.
These eyes,
see through, your disguise..
This soul is craving
your sweet sin.
This love, is so hard
to live in...
I exalt all my feelings,
I'm un-distracted,
by my surroundings
My meditation,
is engaged by solely
One thing...the thoughts I harbor,
from within.
My spirit is soaring,
from a love I'm adoring.
A sentimental bareing
of what my hearts wearing.
A visual exhibition,
of my own admission.
Is my submission!!! Of what I'm wishing,
is for you to, let me in.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2013

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cherryreggae
Awhh rapture thanks so much, love your comments. They really do make my day!!!thumbs up grin teddybear :)
shaaz_khan
Hi Cherrywave
deep thinking
Huh..Awesomethumbs up
Thanks
Ladybee42
You got rhythm Cherry - it's kind of like a rap rhythm which is quite cool applause


purple heart purple heart purple heart
JimEee
Cherry

Strong feelings!
Enjoyed!

JimEee
cherryreggae
Thanks shaaz, 4 your commenthandshake teddybear
cherryreggae
Lol ladybee, it did feel like a rap & just went with the rythymndancing cool lol thanks 4 ur comment:)
cherryreggae
Glad you enjoyed jimeee...thanksbouquet
watersandthewild
...honest, Cherry.
Best wishes,
Ru
cherryreggae
Appreciate your comment ru thanks!!!bouquet
trurorob
Enjoyed reading this one.
Rob
Yankee4you
Very well written.....experiencing in full 'Your soul is craving your sweet sin' reminded me of a song lyric....in a song by Gillian Welch...called 'Look at Miss Ohio'...she states..."Oh I wanna do right but not right now"...quite is the natural state of mankind....exposed....
wine
Laughlindesert
Cherry, I could never come up with such strong emotion. I can remember a love that cared little about what the next day brought or the consequences we were facing. or what peolpe thought. lasted three years. i would do it all over in a heartbeat. So I am glad you felt sommething so strongly and could put it into words. Good girl.
beautifulyou
I really enjoyed this write cherry, both its expression and cadence.

I especially like
A sentimental bareing
of what my hearts wearing.



Great write writing

I experience it as music!
cherryreggae
Glad you enjoyed trurorob...thanks for your comment!!!bouquet
cherryreggae
Thanks Yankee!! I listened to Gillian Welch....thanks for sharing that song. I never heard it before, love the lyrics...& exposed state so true Ty:)teddybear
cherryreggae
Thankyou Laughlin, appreciate you sharing that comment, I Think its hard sometimes to let out what you feel but I think when your sure, it just feels right!!! Ty :)
heart beating gift heart beating
cherryreggae
Thanks beautifulyou!!! Your right, it is like music, cause I was in a musical mode when writing it :) thanks appreciate your comment!!!teddybear bouquet
cherryreggae
Thanks so much Phyllis, always appreciate your kind words & thoughtfulness. hug bouquet purple heart
cafetwo2010
This is a melt down..I'm calling the police..but they can't save me in time..kiss wine
cherryreggae
Lol cafe... rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing a bit mushy ha:) love your comment smitten Ty thumbs up grin yay
ladyjewelonline today!
wine this is an amazing write, just reading back on somebouquet
Loved this hug
darkhorse555
you drew a beautiful heart in words beautifulangel
cherryreggae
Many thanks ladyjewel...so glad you liked ityay wine ty 4 commentingteddybear
cherryreggae
Truly appreciate your lovely.comment dh...thankyouteddybear
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