This heart can't wait to fall right in and these words, hope that they will sink in. These eyes, see through, your disguise.. This soul is craving your sweet sin. This love, is so hard to live in... I exalt all my feelings, I'm un-distracted, by my surroundings My meditation, is engaged by solely One thing...the thoughts I harbor, from within. My spirit is soaring, from a love I'm adoring. A sentimental bareing of what my hearts wearing. A visual exhibition, of my own admission. Is my submission!!! Of what I'm wishing, is for you to, let me in.
Very well written.....experiencing in full 'Your soul is craving your sweet sin' reminded me of a song lyric....in a song by Gillian Welch...called 'Look at Miss Ohio'...she states..."Oh I wanna do right but not right now"...quite is the natural state of mankind....exposed....
LaughlindesertLemoore, California USAJan 20, 2013
Cherry, I could never come up with such strong emotion. I can remember a love that cared little about what the next day brought or the consequences we were facing. or what peolpe thought. lasted three years. i would do it all over in a heartbeat. So I am glad you felt sommething so strongly and could put it into words. Good girl.
beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 20, 2013
I really enjoyed this write cherry, both its expression and cadence.
I especially like A sentimental bareing of what my hearts wearing.
Thankyou Laughlin, appreciate you sharing that comment, I Think its hard sometimes to let out what you feel but I think when your sure, it just feels right!!! Ty :)
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deep thinking
Huh..Awesome
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Strong feelings!
Enjoyed!
JimEee
Best wishes,
Ru
Rob
I especially like
A sentimental bareing
of what my hearts wearing.
Great write
I experience it as music!
Loved this