Madonna Moon

In the still kiss of dawn
Madonna moon murmurs
goodbye to a favorite child.

She fades from a place
where birds, who once
slipped through small hands,
sing of freedom
in a fair, gold sky.

I stand on the edge of morning
scattering my dreams
towards tomorrow.
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Posted: Jan 2013

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Comments (10)

Skybow
Sorry that last line should not be there and I don't know if I can edit it.
cafetwo2010
Beautiful poem dear. Romantic sentiments indeed..smitten
Skybow
Thank you cafetwo2010 and CelticPoet12, You are both kind to read and comment. I managed the edit CelticPoet12, thanks for the info!
rapturecapture
Hi skybow
Amazing poem...scattering my dreams towards tomorrow...how lovely is that...angel
Thank you for your thoughts and words.
Loved it heart wings
cherryreggae
Lovely words woven into this beautiful poem...skybow. thanks 4 sharing!!!bouquet heart wings
Poetnumber1
I like the imagery you painted in this piece.Beautifulhandshake
Ladybee42
Such a soft and gentle write Skybow, I see you standing there your dreams flying from your hands.

thumbs up purple heart purple heart
Skybow
I am blessed by all your comments, it encourages me to write more. Thank you so much!
beautifulyou
"I stand on the edge of morning...


A wonderful way to begin the ending here!
I love that 'view'... from every angle


Thanks for your sharing purple heart
Fellsman
Hi Skybow

You make us of some stunning metaphor in this delightful write.

Bill wine
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