Someone Else

Im looking for a resolution and searching for a better life
Im hoping that these broken wings will let me to fly
I step to the left and take in a deep breath
One more chance I will turn into one more regret
While everything that's on my right keeps telling me to fight
Im knocked down by the third round and I'm seeing blinking lights
Its seems this would be my luck I feel like giving up
I keep asking for Your help but God I know You've had enough
Its burning on my mind its bleeding through my eyes
A little more salt in the wound maybe will help me realize
And then I think about Mary and all that she has lost
Suddenly all of my problems started getting small
Maybe that is the answer maybe I'm not enough
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
Anyone who read the touch knows Mary...cheers have a wonderful day :)

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darkhorse555
ah that was lovely i enjoyed hug thumbs up
smmerwind
And then I think about Mary and all that she has lost
Suddenly all of my problems started getting small
Maybe that's the answer maybe I'm not enough
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug

YES JAMES GO AND SAY HI FOR ME TO MARY WILL YOU? SHE IS AS A MATTER OF FACT, THE ONE IN THE MIDDLE OF MY RENDITION? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN? YOU SAID, ON YOUR CHALLENGE, MARY IS NOT A FIGMENT OF THE IMAGINATION. SHE IS VERY REAL MY DEAR BROTHER IN PEN.

YES WHEN WE OPEN UP TO THEM AND GIVE THEM OUR TIME AND OUR CONCERN, THAT IS WHEN WE DO FEEL THAT PRICELESS, EMPATHY FROM OUR DEEPEST OF OUR SOUL. IT HEALS US MORE THAN IT HEALS THEM.

ONLY THEN OUR EYES HAVE TRULY SEEN. GOD BLESS YOU. GOD BLESS MARY AND GOD BLESS US ALL.

thanks for the share

smmerwind
Poetnumber1
And then I think about Mary and all that she has lost
Suddenly all of my problems started getting small
Maybe that is the answer maybe I'm not enough
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug


I like the switch in feelings there Jesse,i hope all is well my friend.Powerful lesson portrayedcheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you DarkHorse I am really glad you enjoyed....handshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you Phyllis I am glad you read and yes Mary is a very real person that I see and take time to check on. Not that Im a hero nor trying but she is by my shop so I see her every day and night. Thank you again.....Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Hello Mr MMPN1 , yes everything is fine unless you want to sit and listen to me complainlaugh , but really I just thought of the first two lines and free penned it from there and this is what the outcome was without direction my friend.....Jessecheers
Macduff5
Hi fjames,

I love the rhythm and rhyme of this one. Of course the message is a very selfless one. True we should put all our problems in perspective. thumbs up cheers
heidi3626
lovely write thanks for sharinghandshake cheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much Macduff, Im glad you stopped by.....Jessehandshake
jk2you
"Maybe that is the answer maybe I'm not enough
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug"

THIS IS JUST AWSOME
fjamesj9701
Hey JK thank you very much. Very kind. Thank you againhandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much Heidi for stopping by and reading.wine
fjamesj9701
Thank you all very much for reading and commenting.i really appreciate it very much.....jesse
niah9
hug comfort teddybear
fjamesj9701
Back at you Kathy of New Zealandteddybear jesse
shadow1950
Its seems this would be my luck I feel like giving up
sometimes we falter on the way

Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug

we forget others so good to be reminded
Jessie I like this ty for sharingteddybear bouquet hug
fjamesj9701
Thank you for reading Shadow. It is always a Pleasure.....Jessewine
trurorob
So many talk about caring, but you actually walk the walk, good poem Jesse.
Rob
fjamesj9701
Thank you Rob, it's always good to see you my friend.....Jessehandshake
Bentlee
Jesse, quite to the point in all you convey here, I liked it very much, cheers and be well. Jon.
Odette67
A stunning inspirational write.purple heart
fjamesj9701
Thank you Jon for taking the time to read and comment...Jessebeer
fjamesj9701
Thank you Odetta, its really nice to see you. and I appreciate the comment very much...Jessewine
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