Im looking for a resolution and searching for a better life Im hoping that these broken wings will let me to fly I step to the left and take in a deep breath One more chance I will turn into one more regret While everything that's on my right keeps telling me to fight Im knocked down by the third round and I'm seeing blinking lights Its seems this would be my luck I feel like giving up I keep asking for Your help but God I know You've had enough Its burning on my mind its bleeding through my eyes A little more salt in the wound maybe will help me realize And then I think about Mary and all that she has lost Suddenly all of my problems started getting small Maybe that is the answer maybe I'm not enough Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
Anyone who read the touch knows Mary...cheers have a wonderful day :)
smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 15, 2013
And then I think about Mary and all that she has lost Suddenly all of my problems started getting small Maybe that's the answer maybe I'm not enough Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
YES JAMES GO AND SAY HI FOR ME TO MARY WILL YOU? SHE IS AS A MATTER OF FACT, THE ONE IN THE MIDDLE OF MY RENDITION? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN? YOU SAID, ON YOUR CHALLENGE, MARY IS NOT A FIGMENT OF THE IMAGINATION. SHE IS VERY REAL MY DEAR BROTHER IN PEN.
YES WHEN WE OPEN UP TO THEM AND GIVE THEM OUR TIME AND OUR CONCERN, THAT IS WHEN WE DO FEEL THAT PRICELESS, EMPATHY FROM OUR DEEPEST OF OUR SOUL. IT HEALS US MORE THAN IT HEALS THEM.
ONLY THEN OUR EYES HAVE TRULY SEEN. GOD BLESS YOU. GOD BLESS MARY AND GOD BLESS US ALL.
thanks for the share
smmerwind
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 15, 2013
And then I think about Mary and all that she has lost Suddenly all of my problems started getting small Maybe that is the answer maybe I'm not enough Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
I like the switch in feelings there Jesse,i hope all is well my friend.Powerful lesson portrayed
Thank you Phyllis I am glad you read and yes Mary is a very real person that I see and take time to check on. Not that Im a hero nor trying but she is by my shop so I see her every day and night. Thank you again.....Jesse
Hello Mr MMPN1 , yes everything is fine unless you want to sit and listen to me complain , but really I just thought of the first two lines and free penned it from there and this is what the outcome was without direction my friend.....Jesse
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMar 16, 2013
Hi fjames,
I love the rhythm and rhyme of this one. Of course the message is a very selfless one. True we should put all our problems in perspective.
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 22, 2013
Its seems this would be my luck I feel like giving up sometimes we falter on the way Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug we forget others so good to be reminded Jessie I like this ty for sharing
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Suddenly all of my problems started getting small
Maybe that's the answer maybe I'm not enough
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
YES JAMES GO AND SAY HI FOR ME TO MARY WILL YOU? SHE IS AS A MATTER OF FACT, THE ONE IN THE MIDDLE OF MY RENDITION? IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN? YOU SAID, ON YOUR CHALLENGE, MARY IS NOT A FIGMENT OF THE IMAGINATION. SHE IS VERY REAL MY DEAR BROTHER IN PEN.
YES WHEN WE OPEN UP TO THEM AND GIVE THEM OUR TIME AND OUR CONCERN, THAT IS WHEN WE DO FEEL THAT PRICELESS, EMPATHY FROM OUR DEEPEST OF OUR SOUL. IT HEALS US MORE THAN IT HEALS THEM.
ONLY THEN OUR EYES HAVE TRULY SEEN. GOD BLESS YOU. GOD BLESS MARY AND GOD BLESS US ALL.
thanks for the share
smmerwind
Suddenly all of my problems started getting small
Maybe that is the answer maybe I'm not enough
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
I like the switch in feelings there Jesse,i hope all is well my friend.Powerful lesson portrayed
I love the rhythm and rhyme of this one. Of course the message is a very selfless one. True we should put all our problems in perspective.
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug"
THIS IS JUST AWSOME
sometimes we falter on the way
Stop thinking of myself and give Someone else a hug
we forget others so good to be reminded
Jessie I like this ty for sharing
Rob