Should I

by ChristinDewToronto, Ontario, Canada

Aug 2013 569 Views 10 comments

Should I?

Should I give you the hand
So you would notice my present?
Should I show you the dance
So you would step with the band?

Should I bring you the skies,
while you look for the stars?
Should I blow you the kiss
in the middle of breeze

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Posted: Aug 2013

About this poem:

Just another sleepless night

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Comments (10)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 5, 2013

grabbing a handful of stars lighting up your piece beautiful

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaAug 5, 2013

And I hope those stars could work out like a sleeping pill angel2

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 5, 2013

hello there, we think of so much looking at the stars,

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 5, 2013

they would light up your dreams

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaAug 5, 2013

Hey Lady

the stars always worth the stare

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaAug 5, 2013

Thanks Darkhorse, and may the dreams would be true...

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 5, 2013

Quite different and original.I like it Christin.Nice job.

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaAug 6, 2013

Thanks and I am glad that you like it Poet.

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 21, 2013

should i say i came too late,
to catch a star and read this instead,
could i say if i may,
that this has brought a smile for me today.

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaAug 21, 2013

Nothing is too late,
When its about to say you're glad
And when someone smile on a poem he read
I felt a nice evening is coming ahead

Thanks Again Morgen