Moon, star and skies Wish they could hear some cries about the lonely girl about the broken pearl
dear Master Wind, please blow this shallow mind, release pain and left it all behind and tomorrow is about to define
Ring your bell and save the day questioning what God about to play for the life goes on its way nothing left here but the black and grey.
If I cry now would you mind to hear for this heart would no longer to be here Lead me to empty space without my dear and the silence would be my only fear.
it was my pleasure reading such a beautiful poem i thank you for sharing
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaSep 3, 2013
It is my pleasure to share
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 4, 2013
Hi Christindew, your poem is excellent for the readers. Emotive and impressive work that I really enjoyed perusing today. Thanks for your uplifting review on my work.
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaSep 4, 2013
You are the poetnumber1 literally, how can I am not admire you thank you for your comment on my poem
bungallow55Lakeland, Florida USASep 4, 2013
Hi Christin,
You are really good, beautiful lyrics indeed
and don't be ashamed, even professionals writers sometimes they can't explain their own poetry.
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good to see you here
Lovely , but melancholy poem --we all feel like this from time to time --hope for happier days to come -take care
Writing a poem is another release of my heart when no words or pictures can describe it..
You are really good, beautiful lyrics indeed
and don't be ashamed, even professionals
writers sometimes they can't explain their
own poetry.