Play Game

by ChristinDewToronto, Ontario, Canada

Nov 2013 588 Views 14 comments

Play the Game

For the King of the wind,
Hard time you left behind,
Breeze wind that made me blind,
Something in my heart just couldn't find,
Your loud sound just let me assigned,
What's in your mind, I accept no lied.

For the Queen of the sea,
Thunder in your harbour just witnessed me
Looking far away above God's knee,
Still I couldn't see what's in His sightsee
To play my life around like a kitty,
I ain't angel for everyone to see.

I am talking to you my shining moon,
My heart thundering the typhoon,
Don't you pretend not seeing my doom,
You are not that blind to see me loom,
Do you hear me now don't you just dare to assume.

These are my anger, my pain and my pride,
To the center of this life,
Please stop playing this cross-path game of mine,
Ain't that fun to see me tied,
Your game was not funny,
And I cannot hide.

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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (14)

CatfootAround here, Western Cape South AfricaNov 6, 2013

Not exactly a slouch either, are you? This is beautiful.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 6, 2013

Catfoot got to agree with you see their is a poet in all of us.
christen loved the picture to your lovely poem too.

RavensgoldPanchos Villas, Wexford IrelandNov 6, 2013

Lovely words Christin, I enjoyed reading this

Anthony.

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 6, 2013

Cat, Redex, and Anthony
This is just a short conversation with the life, playing the fate so bad, sometimes.

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 6, 2013

I find this refreshing and i see a tough cat!
keep it up sunshine. . .

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 6, 2013

Thanks Morgen

your kitty cat has grew up now

mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 6, 2013

very beautyful poem indeed

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 6, 2013

Thanks mimzy

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAFeb 17, 2014

Ok sweetie, more suggestions::grin:
This poem is written in a style referred to
as "Royal Rhyme", and such, if you want to follow
the correct structure of the art form, you need
to "Capitalize" every first word of every line.

Otherwise-"I Love It"!!!

Robert

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAFeb 17, 2014

Christin

Here is a poem of mine written is similar style,
hopefully with its example you will better understand
that of which I speak:

My Reason

You, my love, are the all of all,
The sun’s sweet kiss,
The love bird’s call;
You, my love, are the all of love,
A warm summer’s day,
A free flying dove;
You, my love, are the all of me,
The life of my being,
My reason to be;
Without you, my love,
No sun’s sweetly kiss,
No birds for to call,
No warm summer’s bliss,
No dove to fly free,
No life left in me;
Without you, my love,

…No reason to be.

-Sinclair-

“If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you.”

? A. A. Milne
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...Hope this helps you

And, by the way, "Play The Game" is a pretty powerful piece!

Robert

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaFeb 17, 2014

Hi Rob, I never knew about this "Royal Rhyme" before. Thanks for the knowledge. I know nothing about poem, really. This is an escape for me from my daily activities.
Hope you enjoy your day
Regards,
Christina