All night long 40 words challenge

by ChristinDewToronto, Ontario, Canada

Nov 2013 524 Views 14 comments

All night long (40 words challenge)

Bring me the sun
I'll give you my moon
Though it's not us
For being together so free
Still the love we had
Pretending to share
Grab my hands and be here
To dance and to stand
All night long

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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (14)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 16, 2013

extremely beautifully drawn piece

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 16, 2013

Thanks Liam

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 16, 2013

Beautifully crafted Christin. I'm glad I read your poem tonight.

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 16, 2013

Gentle and tender --beautiful Christin

lovely to read this tonight - thankyou -F

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 16, 2013

Thanks Poet and Serenity for stopping by and enjoyed the poem. It was fun to create the 40 words challenge

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 17, 2013

Nicely done, its not that easy to do to abide by the restriction
Rob

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 17, 2013

Indeed Rob, it's not an easy challenge

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USANov 18, 2013

This asks an interesting question about being one with each other versus together. How does one describe the night?

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 18, 2013

Hi Yankee, the night is part of life that full with mystery. It has a romantic and dark side in the same time. When two people met in a misty night, two strangers who fell in love but cannot be together as each one has their own dark side but couldn't resist the love airing on their ear. And when the night is over, they woke up and start to doubt the love itself and pretend that the love is still there. That's why it would be nice to freeze the night where the love is perfect surrounded by its own mystery.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 18, 2013

Lovely just lovely

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaNov 18, 2013

Thank you Redex

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 18, 2013

Bring me the sun
I'll give you my moon
Though it's not us
For being together so free
Still the love we had
Pretending to share
Grab my hands and be here
To dance and to stand
All night long

This is so lovely Christin.