Losing Rhythm

by ChristinDewToronto, Ontario, Canada

Sep 2013 569 Views 14 comments

Losing The Rhythm

The yellow moon was arising,
and your picture was suddenly appearing,
with the smile I've been missing,
and laugh we'd both longing.

The day you disappearing,
and other black days seems long lasting,
I stopped the cry and wondering,
why the time we had such a dreaming.

You brought me the rhythm,
you make me sing the rhythm,
and now you're gone with those rhythm,
I am losing the rhythm
as you are the rhythm.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Sep 2013

About this poem:

It's been a week now and still miss him sometimes.

Post Comment

Comments (14)

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 20, 2013

I honestly wish he reply to back asap!
have faith and god bless

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 20, 2013

This is something I can relate to Christin. Longing is good.

bungallow55Lakeland, Florida USASep 20, 2013

That's normal, a week is not enough
belive me, time is on your side
and keep your rhythm beating

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaSep 20, 2013

@morgen, honestly I think he won't return, he made his decision not to contact me again

got all my contact deleted and he blocked me in here too. Anyway, life goes on though I still didnt know why and i tried to stop wondering why. Thanks for stopping by and have a nice evening. Its full moon outside now

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaSep 20, 2013

@Poet

indeed

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 20, 2013

your eyes are sweet like berries,
your smile promises many kisses,
one day you'll find your prince charming,
and remembered this toad said this!

You will find one and that's a promise. . .
need I say more?

ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaSep 20, 2013

Morgen, thanks, thats so sweet.