It's you

The door witnessed our last hug,
that night you said you will be back,
and gave the smile that made me spark,
for tomorrow come and leave the dark.

The same door I look at everyday,
waiting the sound of knocking at my door I pray,
that you will come again today,
would it make me dismay?

I don't wanna cry,
thinking how real you are,
touching my cheek that bare,
I blushed and it was suddenly a glare.

Would it be my insane thought,
dreaming your touch so soft,
lay in your arms....ah must be so hot?
God save me from this stupid distraught...

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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Missing someone is not easy when we never know if he/she missed us too

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beautifulyou
Hi ChristinDew,

a door can truly be a multidimensional portal;
when it presents itself, we go through it or
not... we can use it to move forward or
stand still.. another viewpoint rests inside
either direction... follow your instincts wine
darkhorse555
truly beautifully penned pieceangel
ChristinDew
Thank you beautifulyou, my instinct told me that I should wait for another knocking at my door and will sure be open for him wink
ChristinDew
Thank you Liam, I like your new picture by the way, lovely...wine
Poetnumber1
Lovely work Christin. I enjoyed reading your poem this evening. :)
ChristinDew
thank you Poet, hope you have a nice day wine
Redex
A beautiful poem with oh so much longingteddybear
ChristinDew
Thanks Redex, missing someone was just oh so lovely wine I wish you have a great day teddybear
Circleofflame
Nice poem, my dear! Just on the precipice of the moment. I'm not a big poetry fan as you know but your poetry is some of the best written on this site!
ChristinDew
Thanks Dear J! I really appreciate your time reading it. You have talent too, remember? Post it in here and give it a try, will you? wink
TAR_734
God save us all, sweet Christincrying angel
Poignant, touching writesad flower
Enjoyed it much
Robertbouquet
teddybear
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