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I painted a picture of your face
With some beautiful flowers but the skies were gray
Behind you maybe a sun that will never glow
On a withering tree with no leaves to blow
Hanging from a branch is an old tire swing
And a heart shaped carving for you and me
It says something about how we'd last 4-ever
But your heavenly smile I can not remember
Just a shadow that lacks and strays far behind
As I try to capture your love with a heart thats blind
So I painted a cloud just to hide your face
As I wondered how does that color taste
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Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
An earlier poem lost in time

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Comments (26)

Poetnumber1
Truly a beauty you've composed here Young Skywalker. Smashing end! You take the reader there with you = amazing.cheers
beautifulyou
sad and beautiful and more sad flower

ty for your heart's sharing Jesse,
bungallow55
And a poem, made its waywine
darkhorse555
sweet talking honey drips beautiful piece i tip my hat a new chapter draws a heart angel thumbs up grin
Odette67
As ever, excellent poem jesse. hug purple heart
Spartacus2012
Hey Jesse,
Great write as you paint your verse..I can relate..

Kensuper
madtat29
Man bro..like if i wrote I it couldnt get any realer...mad propshandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr MMPNUnoB1, as al;ways its encouragement like yours and from you that keeps me writing and then its reading your work that makes me want to stop Master Sensei laugh . Thank you for your time my friend...Young Skywalkerbeer
fjamesj9701
Thank you Beautiful , always a pleasure my dear lady...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you LDH good t i see you my ind...Jesse handshake
Redex
I loved reading your poem. You have so much in it. Yes it is sad but so cleverly done.
Your poem is quite inspirational.teddybear
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much Fiona, I have been enjoying the reasing of your kind comments.hug Thank you with warm regard...Jessewine
Happygolucky4uonline today!
I loved it. I read it a few times before commenting. Because the words seemed to flow together as if conjoined twins making a beautiful poetry. Well done and so melancholy rose
ladyjewelonline today!
hug funny how the momory of something is so much clearer than the picturekiss
as usual written with the flow of the windteddybear
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much C always pleasant to hear from you...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Hey Ken, I am always pleased to see your presence my friend and thankful for your time and thoughts.Regard...Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you MT, always good to see you my friend and brother. Thank yo again for the props as well...Jesse Jamescheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you kindly Red and so great to see you. Warm regards...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much Happy, so glad to see you and a pleasure to hear from you on this poem. Thank you again...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much LJ. Its alway my pleasure...Jessewine
morgen90210
Jesse its like a cold cool glass of your favourite drink
everytime when you read this poem again
fjamesj9701
Thank you much Morgen, I will accept that comment to the fullest my friend...Jessewine
soulgoddess
I love this little poem.... you are a very creative painter indeed ;) hug wine
fjamesj9701
Thank you SG, Im glad to see you stopping by, thank you very much for your comments…Jessewine
trurorob
Sad but lovely Jesse.
Rob
fjamesj9701
Thank you Rob , very much appreciate your time, and good to see you….Jessehandshake
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