by iluvisis1Springdale, Arkansas, USA
Oct 2013 602 Views 8 comments
La Neige
Crystal flakes of gentle measure
tingle on my tongue
Just like the way if felt when
I was oh so very young.
The sun is bright,my breath is cold-
it comes out like a cloud...
Dancing , disappearing far above
the crystal shrouds.
The blankets softly decorate the hills
and winsome trees
In silent adoration of the glory
of the freeze.
I close my eyes-stand very still
enraptured in delight;
And soon the diamonds in the sky
have ushered in the night.
The beauty of the evening gently
soothes my naked soul,
Just like the ones that came before
in ancient days of old.
Resplendent in her flowing grace,
eternal she goes on-
In humble honor do I bow
before the great beyond.
tingle on my tongue
Just like the way if felt when
I was oh so very young.
The sun is bright,my breath is cold-
it comes out like a cloud...
Dancing , disappearing far above
the crystal shrouds.
The blankets softly decorate the hills
and winsome trees
In silent adoration of the glory
of the freeze.
I close my eyes-stand very still
enraptured in delight;
And soon the diamonds in the sky
have ushered in the night.
The beauty of the evening gently
soothes my naked soul,
Just like the ones that came before
in ancient days of old.
Resplendent in her flowing grace,
eternal she goes on-
In humble honor do I bow
before the great beyond.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2013
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Comments (8)
I enjoyed it
his construction...but what 'La Neige' means?
We were like
Watering plastic flowers
You could never see it
You could never see
We always danced
On broken glass
You, as
Everything that seems like you
While I'm melting in your hands
I'm forgetting
Goodbye,
Whatever comes, must be without you
I won't stay in your vacuum
I'm forgetting you
You could never see
It's our fate
No one belongs to anyone
No one
You could never see
It was already written
I spent all my words
You, as
Everything that seems like you
While I'm melting in your hands
I'm forgetting
Goodbye,
Whatever comes, must be without you
I won't stay in your vacuum
I'm forgetting you
(While you're) with other men
In other cities
As you're walking
The first story that you read
The first man that you loved
Your real pain
As well as your loneliness
May fill your eyes
To other men
In other cities
You won't make it known/obvious
Maybe one day you'll miss (me)
Wipe the loneliness from your eyes (and)
At that moment, whisper my name to the walls
There are thousand knives in my back
They bear your name
Every single one adores you
Maybe one day you'll miss (me)
(While you're) with other men
In other cities
As you're walking
The life that you chose
The last man that you passed
Your real pain
As well as your loneliness
You choose silence (literally "silent letters")
To other men
In other cities
You won't make it known/obvious
Maybe one day you'll miss (me)
Wipe the loneliness from your eyes (and)
At that moment, whisper my name to the walls
There are thousand knives in my back
They bear your name
Every single one adores you
Thank you for your answer, La Neige (The Snow)
I like it
"Bravo"
Robert