Enchanting Words

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There was a time along my path
Your words drew me to yours
But now in painful aftermath
The reasons are a blur

So perfectly upon warm breath
You spoke me into love
With a fervor and a depth
I thought came from above

I smiled a perfect smile
In the direction of the sun
Thanking God for this one mile
Where loving had begun.

You played your part so perfectly
With the magic of your words
I was blinded to reality
By the truths I thought I heard

Unlike a perfect fairytale
With an ending that brings joy
I was swept along behind a veil
Where pretty words became the ploy

You enchanted me so long
I built a pedestal
My heartstrings played the song
That has no words at all.

Where once you gave so freely
Of the magic of your words
Now your back is to me
With words that go unheard


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Poem written by Brandi Voyles
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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (4)

darkhorse555
very beautiful crafted piece angel
mimzy333
i think this is true of most internet affares, most never last and those that do rarly succeed.
fjamesj9701
Beautiful writing, first of yours to read and am sure I will enjoy many more. Thank you for sharing…Jessewine
Lively_Waters
Thank you all ... I do appreciate your comments!

@fjames..I have several pieces on here if you want to see others. It was very rewarding to receive your praise, since I have read several of your poems on here, and have experienced s connection with you. I first saw one poem and commented. Then, I went on to see what others you had posted. Each read was the same for me. I was never disappointed.

Again, thank you all who commented. Posting my work is sort of like becoming a dart board. I'm not sure whether it is better to have missed the mark...or be ignored. dunno
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