I cant see you

by Amendashenyang, Liaoning, China

Dec 2009 632 Views 5 comments

I can't see you.....

I can't see your eyes
I can't see your face
Because you are in cloud

I can't take your hands
I can't touch your shoulder
Because you are in fog

Step out of the cloud, darling
Let me see your tender eyes

Step out of the fog, darling
Let me warm your ice heart

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Posted: Dec 2009

About this poem:

Before writing the poem, I went to check my eyesight. My eyesight are very well. So I can't see you, is not because of my eyesight. lol

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Comments (5)

AmendaOPshenyang, Liaoning ChinaDec 7, 2009

Don't know if there are some mistakes here, hope be told.

lastwaltzSunshine Coast, Queensland AustraliaDec 16, 2011

No mistakes dear Amenda...I can see your message clearly,lovely poem

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USADec 16, 2011

Sweet as pie darlin'..mabey sweeter.

AmendaOPshenyang, Liaoning ChinaDec 17, 2011

Thanks for all the comments, gentlemen

AmendaOPshenyang, Liaoning ChinaDec 17, 2011

But my writing is really not good enough, because he is still in cloud in fog in far distance where I can't reach can't hear and even don't know where he is exactly......