Christmas Poem.....with a thought...

Wine and turkey….
Log and Puddings…
Warmth from the fire..
Laughter….
Sure looks good from out here….

I tighten my tattered coat...and wonder
Where would I fit the Christmas Tree…?
In this cardboard box…
I call my Home
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
I has posted this poem on the site, at this time 3 years ago... It has since been archived, so I thought about starting a new thread..... (with a little adjustment to the poem)..



Blessings, Greetings and good Health to Everyone...
santa waving teddybear

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Comments (18)

jazzy75
twinself - Thanks for sharing this poem. I like the perspective and thought that went into it :-)hug
boyshchrm6
Very nice reflective
poem. wonderfully worded.angel thumbs up reindeer santa waving
QuietStormF
Great poem about a very real problem.. homelessness.. I actually have known people to whom a refrigerator box.. was HOME.. and they were the lucky ones.. teddybear bouquet
trurorob
yeah! most of us take it all for granted!!
rob
twinself
Thank You all for your very encouraging comments. I have just *visited* the poetry section and was pleasantly surprised: I had forgotten writing this at all. blushing hug Hope you're all keeping well!
Spartacus2012
Hi Twin,
A heartfelt yuletide write depicting those who have not...Happy New Year! Thanks for the lovely comment on my verse..

Regards,

Kentip hat
twinself
You're welcome Spartacus. Guess I should start visiting the Poetry section more often.. it's people's souls all over. hug
elo69
nice poem....elo...wave
nonsmoker
Nice and humble, as all things should be at Christmas time. gift
rapturecapture
Hi twinself

Thank you for sharing...A very thoughtful read

Martina xxxbouquet hug angel wave
twinself
Elo, nonsmoker and rapture.... thanks for reading.

I guess indeed, it's about humbleness..not taking things for granted...and counting our blessings and not our lack.

Hope you enjoyed New Year's day, and may the rest of it bring you health, love and serenity, in no particular order...

hug
fjamesj9701
Although the Holidays are over for now I still enjoy the spirit. Wonderful write and glad it resurfaced for me to have had the chance to read…Jesse
twinself
Thank You fjames.... glad you enjoyed. All the best for You and Yours.. Twin
Poetnumber1
Very good concept you've penned here. ''Sure looks good from out here'' is a longing that many had to experience during the celebrations of Christmas but never having the means to do so. I'm a first time reader of your poems so I would warmly welcome you to the corner Twinself.
twinself
Thanks for reading poetnumber1...

It is also my favourite line. When I wrote it, I had a mental picture of myself, as a homeless person, standing outside in the bitter cold, looking through the window of a warm dining room, whilst a family was enjoying its Christmas gathering.

Thank you all, for the warm welcome. I don't consider myself a poet, but I feel at home here, sharing some of my thoughts and feelings about the world, and the human psyche... I feel warm good-hearted people posting here... no arguments, no picking on people, no gender bashing etc... I like the atmosphere.

Bless You all..

teddybear
Mizzy4
Hi Twinself,

I found this browsing the site and felt it was worthy of a slot on the top shelf.
Powerful poem highlighting poverty and loneliness in a world of plenty.
Regards Mick.

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DukeOfNugget
Should have invested in BTC banana
southmiami4321online today!
Twin a very thoughtful poem. Like a tribute to those that are mostly unnoticed. Has anybody gone out without a coat under -20 degrees?.... Can you imagine having a cardboard box as a roof? It's your whole world. SM
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