Tears in her wine

She remembers..
Perhaps she remembers
to well
Before he arrived she always
lit those red candles
Her cottage deep in the woods
was the perfect place
A hoot owl, the muffled bark of
dogs echoing accross the frozen
lake were familliar sounds and
welcome friends
She smiled and hummed a pleasant
tune as she prepared a seafood
platter
O, those glorious days she thought
to herself
He was the perfect lover
The scent of his after shave always
lingered for a day or so
She relished the thought with the
way she'd unbuttoned his shirt
with her teeth and the way his eyes
would gloss over in hopeless
submission to her feminine wiles
Yet, this night and there would be
another knock on her door from
the local policeman who would
once again enquire about the
whereabouts of her lover
The policeman to date was still
without a clue
They were still beguiled by this
womans feigned sense of loss
The police knew nothing of this
womans betrayal of her lover
And the police would never discover
his body at the bottom of the frozen
lake
Yes, there were tears in the wine, but
they were not the tears of loss..but
Revenge..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014

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Comments (13)

Mizzy4
Wow ! Jim.....what a twist.....what a story....
Great write.
I'm impressed........Mick.snowed in
Odette67
Before he arrived she always
lit those red candles
Her cottage deep in the woods


My word Cafe, I was worried there, when Iread these lines, I thought you had been spying on me going about my buisness in my cottage. blushing Phew.

Fantasic tale dear man, you have so a great imagination you could write a book.
Love ya. hug teddybear
cafetwo2010
Ty odette.. You should have known dear
that each maiden is under strict observance.lol
Especially you cottage chicks. A book sounds
interesting.
Fellsman
Masterful storytelling Jim...

Cheers

Bill
ladyjewel
lips every maiden has a dark side, it depends on how a Man brings it outangel

This I lovedkiss
Redex
wow café a story into the bargain Revenge indeed bitter sweet tears you could say.peace enjoyed the reading teddybear
Skyrim_Princess
Love this teddybear
fjamesj9701
Bitter sweetness , amazing my friend this was an excellent piece to read…Jessehandshake
cafetwo2010
Skyrim.. Thank you much dear. This
was a fun write.
cafetwo2010
Mizzy..

Fellsmen..

ladyjewel..

Redex..

fjames..

Sorry for my delay in responding to you
wonderful friends. I write so many poems
on the run that I sometimes forget to
check back.
darkhorse555
excellently penned loved it angel grin
benidorm
Beautiful poem
got me captivated and reminiscing in
someone I know living in forest.
Girlygirl196349
Love it!!! Thank you for sharing I truly enjoyed reading this poem hug cheering angel
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