She remembers.. Perhaps she remembers to well Before he arrived she always lit those red candles Her cottage deep in the woods was the perfect place A hoot owl, the muffled bark of dogs echoing accross the frozen lake were familliar sounds and welcome friends She smiled and hummed a pleasant tune as she prepared a seafood platter O, those glorious days she thought to herself He was the perfect lover The scent of his after shave always lingered for a day or so She relished the thought with the way she'd unbuttoned his shirt with her teeth and the way his eyes would gloss over in hopeless submission to her feminine wiles Yet, this night and there would be another knock on her door from the local policeman who would once again enquire about the whereabouts of her lover The policeman to date was still without a clue They were still beguiled by this womans feigned sense of loss The police knew nothing of this womans betrayal of her lover And the police would never discover his body at the bottom of the frozen lake Yes, there were tears in the wine, but they were not the tears of loss..but Revenge..
Comments (13)
Great write.
I'm impressed........Mick.
lit those red candles
Her cottage deep in the woods
My word Cafe, I was worried there, when Iread these lines, I thought you had been spying on me going about my buisness in my cottage. Phew.
Fantasic tale dear man, you have so a great imagination you could write a book.
Love ya.
that each maiden is under strict observance.lol
Especially you cottage chicks. A book sounds
interesting.
Cheers
Bill
This I loved
was a fun write.
Fellsmen..
ladyjewel..
Redex..
fjames..
Sorry for my delay in responding to you
wonderful friends. I write so many poems
on the run that I sometimes forget to
check back.
got me captivated and reminiscing in
someone I know living in forest.