CREATION 7

by lindsyjonesunknown, California, USA

Oct 2015 1,123 Views 5 comments

CREATION 7

Author: namaron

by: NAMARON (from blog section)

"CREATION"...(7)

So You Play Along With The Game
Because Theres Nothing Else To Do
If You Discontinue Yourself Here
No.........No Ones Gonna Miss You
So You Stay Around... You Hang About....Hoping For Something New

That Blog That Youve Put Up?
You Check On How Many Views
And When You See Those Low Numbers
You Get On With The Blues
Just As Low As Your Thinking...Yeah....... Its The Same Old News

There You Are............Youre On The Blogs Again
Yes... You Are Here.........But Do They Know?
And You Wonder...............What Should I Do Now?
As Thoughts Are Racing.................Stay Or Go?

So Now You Go......And You Check... Those Whos Viewed Me Views
Did Anybody Look At You?
And When You See That They Did Not
Once Again You Feel Its True
Why Am I Here?... You Think...What.......What Should I Do?

Its Over To The Photo Gallery
Did Anybody Come On Yet?
But Those Faces...... Theyre Not Familiar
What You Thought Is What Youll Get
What Will You Do now....You Need.....You Need... A Reset

Its Back Onto The Blogs Again
Up And Down The Page Youll Scroll
Back To The Photo Gallery..And The Views?... Its The Same Ole
Around And Around And Around Youll Go
Never..............No Never.................Reaching That Goal

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Posted: Oct 2015

About this poem:

this is a wonderful creation of our fellow blogger who is a very delightful contributor, writer and poet...

I have his permission on publishing it here and I find it a very interesting entry. I find myself quite doing the same thing and I am sure some of us feel the same.

Thank you all for your reads and comments.

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Comments (5)

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godsprincessOwego, New York USAOct 16, 2015

It's the same with the poems. I miss the old poets with their wonderful poems. We chit chatted back and forth and they encouraged. The mood on here has changed since they have been banned. I do not visit as much as I use to as I miss their quality poems. There are a few left that I enjoy but I miss the old camaraderie. Things are not the same on here. So sad that one or two people can cause so much grief to others. Thanks for your share.

lindsyjonesOPunknown, California USAOct 16, 2015

princess, I am not even aware of what is going on in here and I am so saddened to hear that. But yes, the mood on here changes every so often, depending on who is here. There are quite a few among those that I love so much but mostly the rest are taking some hiatus...

Anyways, I miss specially Paloma, LadyB, Ahyra, Ondos, Fellsman, Lady Odette, BCBG, Fiona, Oriental Koru, Nu, and many others. I do come every now and then, but you are right, it is not just the same.

Anyways, thanks Princess and hopefully they will come back and let us have fun again. What about our dear Morgen, Poetnumber1, and many more?

thanks again.

puppylove2Boise, Idaho USAOct 17, 2015

Phyllis they are all on a poetry site on Facebook now. one that they have made. there are three of them, poet#1 has his,Liam has his and james has his. I think it is wonderful that you posted this for your friend,it is a very heart felt poem

namaronSeekonk, Massachusetts USAOct 17, 2015

This is The reason I dont Put Anything here

Whats everybody Talkn About?

Not About Whats written..Thats for Sure

By The Way People

The title of this Piece(Which no One seems interested in Is

"Creation".........................

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaOct 17, 2015

Things are not that bad, no matter how sad you sound, my friend, things are not so sad as you describe, my dear. Just brace yourself against some degree of disappointment when you come here, when you begin implementing some plan you have devised carefully. The only thing you shouldn't do is to go away as some of us have done. There is nothing permanent in our life, on this earth. We all are destined to go sooner or later. Keep dropping in, and know: things will improve or get even worse for the time being, cause they keep changing constantly. This site is like our lives: people come and go, some disappear for ever, some stay, some stay forever to walk in this life together with you. This poem is as sad as that I remembered, but with a promising ending:

Sadness is Sea...
Author: Goderdzi Chokheli

Sadness is sea,
Enigmatic, without bounds,
It's a silent mount weighing down on heart,
Blackish moisture
That’s left after sun has gone down.
Sun is melting away, day is drawing to close,
And the sadness is falling as night in my heart.
Night is dark,
Enigmatic, with head lowered down…
Time will pass,
Moon will rise from behind mountainside
And will flood these sad nights,
Same as April white floods
Blackish wood that recovers from winter's blasts.

Kindest regards!