Supernatural Being

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by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Mar 2014 894 Views 18 comments

Supernatural Being

Author: candykid

Ghost-like allurement in neon-blue radiance...
Superlative elegance...
Trance-like abilities emit from your fingertips...
And capture my essence...

Natural attraction, irresistible reaction...
You've stolen my love with your sweet satisfaction...
Supernatural being, I'm clairvoyantly seeing...
The invisible star that you are....

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Posted: Mar 2014

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Comments (18)

Sinclair_RHR

Sinclair_RHRCyberSpace, Missouri USAMar 30, 2014

...I feel you CK!

...I "TRULY" Do!

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 30, 2014

Cleverly done Candykid. It reads like a song.

Angel04

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaMar 30, 2014

I really liked this, it flowed so neatly and reads beautifully, nice and light

Angie

Ahyra

AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 31, 2014

Sweet romantic poem, very nice to read ck

Joseph1112

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaMar 31, 2014

So awesome this was man, Superb!
no need for flowers or candy she will be smitten. Every word!

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 31, 2014

extremely beautifully crafted excellent piece dear friend

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAOct 17, 2014

Thank you Robert, hope all is well.

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAOct 17, 2014

Thank you M.M....sorry for my late follow up to your kind comment.

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAOct 17, 2014

Almost missed this good write brother Christian..

Ken

cafetwo2010

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 18, 2014

This one slipped by me too Candy. I think this is highly creative
and quite an interesting write. Some can actually have that kind
of effect on you.
Cafe

rapturecapture

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandOct 18, 2014

Hi CK

Very deep and beautiful!...loved reading.

Thank you for sharing.

Martina xxx

ImagineLove

ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USAOct 18, 2014

Stellar Candy! I love this pen, Poet's right it does need music!

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 5, 2015

Thanks Angel.......

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 5, 2015

Elena.....thank you ever so kindly......miss you dear.

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAFeb 5, 2015

Thanks Joseph. Its been a while. ...

steve1223

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaFeb 5, 2015

Nice to see this beautiful gem back

avias

aviasSoutheast, Missouri USAFeb 6, 2015

Christian.....Was interesting,haunting and mysterious...liked your concept

candykid

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAOct 11, 2015

Liam......thanks brother. ..

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