Birth of Our Savior

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Dec 2014 1,640 Views 28 comments

The Birth of Our Savior

It's quite interesting how we mortals are limited by time...
Blind with false notions, blind in our minds...
I can clearly recall that day in the spirit world...
The kindness of Angels....the kind that shines fine...

Armies of Angels with soft-spoken words...
Flying with golden silk feathers like birds...
Ready to witness the most important event in all of eternity...
The birth of Our Savior, my eyes were then blurred...

I knelt before Angels....I listened and heard...
I felt I should speak, but there were no words...
It was in Your infinite wisdom to not let me see...
The birth of Our Savior....Ruler of worlds...

You did not withhold all from me however...
Through feathers of Angels, I probably never...
Have seen such cries from such heavenly skies...
As liquid stars dripped from Your heavenly eyes...

For You knew the importance of what had just taken place...
And had orchestrated this concert through time and through space...
It indeed was for me and all of the inhabitants of the earth...
The birth of Our Savior...Oh Sweet Child's Birth......

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Posted: Dec 2014

About this poem:

I truly wish each and every one of you blessings this holiday season.
Please forgive the modern spelling of 'Savior' over the probably much preferred traditional spelling 'Saviour'....

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Comments (28)

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USADec 14, 2014

Magnificent candykid.. This is a special write from you and I
can feel what's in your heart.
Cafe

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandDec 14, 2014

outstandingly beautiful pen dear pal wrote one myself smiling thumbs up

bless you

PassionateArtistWilmington, North Carolina USADec 14, 2014

Thank you candykid

For 'sharing' this beautiful-penned-poem!
I especially liked your lines...
"Have seen such cries,
from such heavenly skies...
As liquid stars dripped from Your heavenly eyes...

Thanks again,
PassionateArtist

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USADec 14, 2014

I remember reading that an angel appeared to Mary and told her that she was to be the mother of Jesus and the father would be God. I remember our manger scene as a child and seeing the angel that hung on top of the manger scene. In the song Philidelphia by Bruce Springsteen is the mention of another angel, "Ain't no angel gonna greet me, it's just you and I my friend."

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandDec 14, 2014

Hi Candy

Lovely flow. really enjoyed reading...Beautiful poem!

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

TadhgusMaximusCork, IrelandDec 14, 2014

Enjoyed this ck....brought me back to the event's that took place in Bethlehem....a place I have been many times! Thanks for the memory.

TM

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USADec 14, 2014

Truly is the reason for the season..Good stuff Christian!

Ken

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoDec 14, 2014

I am awed by the reverential tones you have infused here... I love this...magnificent....

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaDec 15, 2014

This was in true Christmas spirit! Enjoyed the poem very much! Many thanks for sharing! Glad Tidings for Christmas and a Happy New Year, dear poet!

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 15, 2014

This is one of your best Christian. Great work here. Salutations.

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USADec 15, 2014

Hi, candykid,
For You knew the importance of what had just taken place… And had orchestrated this concert through time and through space... Although we mortals are limited by time, faith in One greater than ourselves allows us to keep going forward, even in the face of adversity. Thank you for your poem that allows us to share with you the Blessings of this Season.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USADec 18, 2014

Excellent piece my friend and wishing you a Merry Christmas. Cheers…Jesse OKoroshi

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USADec 24, 2014

I truly thank all of you, and wish you a very Merry Christmas. ..

Abby1963California, USADec 24, 2014

Stunning write !! I enjoyed reading this very much MERRY CHRISTMAS!

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainDec 24, 2014

Fine writing Christian, the subject for me is a tad alien but I still enjoyed the read.
Rob

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USADec 24, 2014

Thank you Abby and Rob. .....Wishing both of you the happiest of holidays.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USADec 20, 2015

I wish everyone here a very Merry Christmas and hope that this holiday season is your best ever........

godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 20, 2015

Very beautiful Christian - I can picture the whole scene in my mind's eye. It must have been a wonderful event for the humble shepherds to see this glorious sight!

Merry Christmas and many blessings to you too.

Kathy angel2

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USADec 18, 2016

Kathy,....Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and all here upon this site.......

godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 19, 2016

Have a Merry and Blessed Christmas Christian. How blessed you are that you were named after our Lord and Savior. And what a lovely poem to read for a second time.

Kathy

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USADec 5, 2017

Bless you Kathy. ....Wishing you a very Happy Holiday Season this year once again.....what a special time of year.....I hope everyone can take full advantage of this Holiday Season. .....God Bless.

Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKDec 6, 2017

Beautiful poem

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USADec 21, 2018

A collective thanks to all...Merry Christmas once again to everyone and Happy Holidays to those that just want to enjoy this time of year. Enjoy your time and freedoms

godsprincessOwego, New York USADec 21, 2018

Merry Christmas Christian.

Kathy

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaDec 23, 2018

What vision CK! Thanks for ressurecting this poem of yours... Looks like I haven't come across it yet. Merry Christmas....wishing you all the very best...from NU and me!