Life is not a poem

Life is not a poem that
makes a perfect rhyme
Our heart is ever a mystery
that puzzles our natural
mind
We seek meaning from without
from a thousand shifting winds
Enlightened by our virtues and
captive to our sins
Shot through and through with
confusion as each war can testify
It's the reason we dread the morning
and why the starving child does cry
O, we hope some genius comes along
or some philosopher with special wit
With them we'll put our trust when at
their feet we'll sit
But as this old world keeps on turning
We pray someone reviews our case
It's then that still small voice whispers,
'It's all a test of faith.'
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2014

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Comments (31)

beautifulyou
Jim, more than lovely angel2
thank you for your beautiful sharing
Odette67
O, we hope some genius comes along
or some philosopher with special wit


This is first class poetry dear Jim. hug purple heart
cafetwo2010
Ty beautifulyou. Thank you darling..
Fellsman
We seek meaning from without
from a thousand shifting winds
Enlightened by our virtues and
captive to our sins



Hi Jim

I just love the above lines, for me the pick from an outstanding poem.

Cheers buddy

Bill wine wine
cafetwo2010
Ty odette.. Most appreciated O maiden from
the far east.
cafetwo2010
Ty Bill.. Good marks from the teacher! You're
slated for that shiny red apple and a 40% increase
in teachers pay. Lol
SCatlyn
Fantastic(as always, whatever the subject)

We are so quick to put someone on a pedestal who is just as human as the rest of us - sure, we can learn alot from others... but no one is perfect & no one is correct all the time - tho you seem to hit the nail on the head quite oftenlaugh

Well, I won't put you on a pedestal, but you're a great poet & imo pretty wise, too.wink Cat

p.s.You have some more poems with comments waiting for replies... grin
cafetwo2010
Ty Scat..Always nice when you drop in dear.
Thank you for all your encouragement which
has been long standing.
benidorm
Beautiful words.
What doesn't break us makes us.
Hope my comments ok.
Got me thinking good, thank you.
cafetwo2010
Ty benidorm.. Your comment is more
than fine friend. Thanks bro.
mcradloff
Life can certainly test your faith, that's for sure. I have always enjoyed the comedians as they aren't interested in judging us, just making us laugh. The current ones I watch on tv are Jimmy Kimmel, David Letterman who is retiring in 2015, John Stewart, and Larry David on Curb Your Enthusiasm.rolling on the floor laughing bunny
fjamesj9701
Now let me to be the one to say to you that this is an awesome piece, really good stuff my friend…Jessebeer
soulgoddess
bouquet teddybear

I agree with brother Alien Jesse here... this is very beautiful poem with many deep thoughts in it ;) daydream
Spartacus2012
Good write Mr Cafe!

Kencheers
gnj4u
Hi, cafetwo2010,
Life is not a poem that makes a perfect rhyme. Nevertheless, we strive to give to and get the most from it while we have the time. Not only do I love waking up in the morning, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Mizzy4
Excellent poem Jim,
Mick.

professor
SnowCoveredMuse
And all these years
I thought poetry was life...

Cafe' I really loved this,
Magnificent my friend, as only
you would do!

~SAS~hug
Ziusudra
Rather profound point of view and vision
cafetwo2010
mcradloff.. Like your point of view friend
Cafe
cafetwo2010
fjames.. Sorry for the late reply bro. Your comment
heart warming as always.
Cafe
cafetwo2010
Soulgoddess.. Thank you much sweet.
Cafe
cafetwo2010
Spart.. Your visit is always a joy bro.
Cafe
cafetwo2010
gnj..Thank you darling..A great pleasure to read
your insights.
Cafe
cafetwo2010
Mizzy.. Always good to hear from you. You're to cool.
cool
Cafe
cafetwo2010
Snow.. Maybe life can't be poetry until we see
the poetry in life. Thank you sweetness.
Cafe
cafetwo2010
Ziusudra.. Thank you friend. We must become as
children to see the profound as it were. The
intelligent have never been so wise.
Cafe
southmiami4321online today!
Upon these days I lost another dear friend. One of a kind.
I scrolled through Cafe's poems and enjoyed reading this one. Missing Cafe dearly on this poetry corner. One more year of his passing but alive with his beloved poems. RIP my friend.
godsprincess
Thank you South Miami - yes Cafe Jim passed away 2 years ago in September. Lest we forget - he was a very influential force in this little corner of the world.

Kathy teddybear sad flower
morgen90210online today!
He is a force of nature ,and when he pass
Left behind reminiscent in his work
For us to admire ,take comfort
And remembrance of a kindred soul

God blessed and in our hearts
Never forgotten ,always loved
sad flower
lovecanberealonline today!
Great wisdom, and understanding of human nature here, all our beauty, flaws, and paradox. Here your words live on! I hope you can see us from the next galaxy, or somewhere. RIP, great online poet.
lovecanberealonline today!
I should have capitalized that: Great Online Poet, RIP, Jim.
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