Keys To Universe

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Apr 2014 741 Views 15 comments

The Keys To The Universe

Somewhere in this universe...
Lies several sets of keys...
Keys that can open doors...
Revealing all the unseen...

Somewhere in this galaxy...
Beings lie in between...
Finding all unbelieved...
Finding all the lost keys....

If there was ever a time...
That time would be now...
If there was ever a place...
That place would be here...
If there was ever a chance...
I cry cause it's lost...
I would manipulate time if I could just to find you....

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Apr 2014

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Comments (15)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 22, 2014

deep heartfelt write christian totally relate beautifully penned dear friend

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandApr 22, 2014

I love the way you use
the imagery of keys to
tell your love story Ck,
Very well penned !
Very nice....also sad.

Mick

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAApr 22, 2014

This one rocks C.K., thanks for perusing my verse as well!

Ken

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 22, 2014

Awesome poem!!

twinself..., Majjistral MaltaApr 22, 2014

Love it candykid. Thanks. And Wow, how amazing it is that poems here always tend to remind me of some song or other....

This one...about immortal love, through lifetimes. "I will find You - Clannad

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 23, 2014

This is fantastic CandyKid.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 26, 2014

Thank you everyone for your kind and specific comments. ....very much appreciated. ....

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 26, 2014

A fine write Christian. I really enjoyed this one.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 26, 2014

That you very much number one. It is always such an honor to read your comments.

beautifulyouNew York, USAApr 26, 2014

This is neat ck,
at first it reminded me of 'Akashic records'

and the last stanza is just powerful

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 26, 2014

Beautiful you......you were the first person to welcome me to this corner with such a kind and welcoming comment. I thank you for your kind words. I have never heard of such records but will look them up. Thank you.

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAApr 26, 2014

The door will be open up to you when it is time CK.

A great longing as it is a testament of continued seeking..

Good luck and I hope you will find her.

Thanks for the read.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 26, 2014

Lindsy.....thank you....

BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 26, 2014

Wow,
I can totally feel your pain in this poem.

I would manipulate time if I could just to find you

Powerful line! Continue your search and I wish you success!

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 29, 2014

Thank you Bajanshay. .....

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