Last poem challenge

I sat in my wheelchair and rolled across my
den to the high standing bookshelf..
Scattered throughout the shelf were dozens
of verses written quickly on scraps of paper
and used as bookmarks
I began fishing out all the snippets of verses
I'd planned to use in what was now to be my
last written work
For some thirty years I'd saved any flash insights
and bursts of inspiration I could use in my final
masterpiece
The doctor said he didn't expect me to live
throughout the week so I worked late into the
night
The old grandfather clock ticked away the final
hours of my life as my final poem began to take
definite shape
It was almost sunrise when suddenly I heard a
noise in the backroom
The sound of shattered glass sent me rolling to
my closet for my shotgun
But before I could load the gun I turned to see
a masked man pointing a revolver at my head
I clutched an excerpt of my poem in my right
hand and the last thing I remember is the shot
ringing out and my falling to the floor
Barely conscious the voices of policemen filled
the room
A policeman stooped down and pulled from my
hand the fragment of paper I was clutching
He read what was to be the title of my poem, 'A
good day to cry..'
But then I heard another voice calling my name..
It was the voice of my house maid
She kept saying, ' Everything is going to be alright
sir, you were not shot, you were just having a bad
dream
I awoke and realized I had merely fallen asleep after
a long night of writing
But the maid pulled a pistol from her purse and
with a devilish grin said, ' I've been waiting for
you to finish your poem because I have plans
to sell your work to my own publisher..
She pulled the trigger and shot me dead..
When she published my poem under her name
she merely changed the title which was now
called.. ' A Good Day to Die..'
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Posted: Apr 2014

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Comments (18)

fjamesj9701
Now that is a last poem, good stuff my friend. Held me until the last and with that I applaud "her" work.Great work Mr Jim…Jessehandshake
beautifulyou
hiya Jim,
darn those butlers and maids anyway
they keep me in business but aren't so good
for other people's health detective
cafetwo2010
fjames..This was another fun write for me..Need a
maid? She's looking for work.lol
cafetwo2010
beautifulyou..So true dear. But like the old saying goes, ' Maids
can become maidens therefore watch thy P's and
Q's.' Lol
darkhorse555
smiling dear friend excellent piece very beautifully crafted last poemangel grin
cafetwo2010
Darkhorse..Thanks much bro..
cafetwo2010
marikia..Wow! I could never be content to call
you my maid.. I must be your servant.
Mizzy4
Great poem Jim !
Rumours rife on the corner now ......
Who shot Jim ?
My money is on that
bold Rapture...she could
never behave ! laugh

confused dunno

Mick.
cafetwo2010
Mizzy.. Tis so true. That rapture chick rode into
Dodge city one night and gunned down Doc Holiday
a littlle known fact to history. She goes by the
name of , La Silver Pistol Reaper..We must sleep
with one eye open.lol
candykid
Killer story style writing! ......way to step up to your own challenge. .....
cafetwo2010
candykid'. Well bro, there goes another poem
laid to rest. Lol
Girlygirl196349
WOW!!! AWEWSOME!!! WOW!! THIS IS GREAT Perfection! I LOVE IT!!hug cheering angel gift balloons balloons
cafetwo2010
Girlygirl.. Thank you so kindly dear..
rapturecapture
Hi Cafelaugh laugh

La Silver Pistol Reaper.scold scold

A good day for a special enquiry me thinks... conversing La MAID could also be a man in disguise dunno laugh

I am innocent of all charges...innocent laugh

Thank you for sharing

La Rapture grin xxxhug angel wave
cafetwo2010
Rapture..Never count your la la's before they
hatch. lol
rapturecapture
Cafe laugh I'm sitting on my la la as we speak...rolling on the floor laughing laugh thumbs up
jazzy75
Love the twist! Glad YOU are still here writing!!peace
cafetwo2010
Hey Jazzy! You' ve been away to long dear. You may
have to do some dungeon time but I'll still bring you
a burgers and fries.lol
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