Vicious Cycle

by orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland, Australia

May 2014 708 Views 12 comments

Vicious Cycle

Author: orientalkoru

Thank you kind people!!!

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Posted: May 2014

About this poem:

The making of an increasingly (physically) sick society.... It's a no win situation...

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Comments (12)

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAMay 6, 2014

I would kill every last insect on your lawn by hand for a one-way ticket to New Zealand just to find someone as half as beautiful as you.....love the poem.

online today!

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMay 6, 2014

How are you my friend, nice thought provoking write.

Happy to see you kabsat

Sinclair_RHRCyberSpace, Missouri USAMay 6, 2014

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMay 8, 2014

Thanks CK...unfortunately I'm not in NZ and if you killed the every bugs in our garden here in Queensland...you'll have a round the world ticket for that! Thanks for commenting mate, much appreciated!

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMay 8, 2014

sorry ...typo ... if you killed ~~the~~ every ~~bugs~~ bug

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 9, 2014

I may be off point but I think of John Lennon's Imagine when I read this but I suppose my thoughts linger astray. Either way nicely done my friend from NZ…Jesse
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Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace...

Imagine no possessions
I wonder if you can
No need for greed or hunger
A brotherhood of man
Imagine all the people
Sharing all the world...

You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join usine:

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMay 16, 2014

Hello LJ my dear kababayan...okay lang kami kabsat kaasi ti Diyos. Pagyamanak to sasar-ong mo idtoy ayan to daniw ko kabsat.

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMay 16, 2014

Hello there our dear Robert Sinclair sir...wherever you are i wish you a good day! Thank you for dropping in, much appreciated!

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaJul 2, 2014

Jessie thanks for the comment mate...don't think it's off topic at all...I also thought of the same song when I was writing this...I guess we can only imagine...thanks once again for your continued support mate

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJul 2, 2014

Cool philosophical write O.K.

Ken

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAJul 2, 2014

You have all but guaranteed a response from me at this point. My first comment stands......;)

orientalkoruOPGlenella, Queensland AustraliaJul 2, 2014

Hi There Ken...thanks mate for dropping in...I'm smiling because when I wrote this I was being sarcastic...you made me read it again to be able to see the philosophical side of it...thanks mate

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