A SciFaiKu

by fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida, USA

May 2014 832 Views 25 comments

A SciFaiKu

Author: Captain James T. Kirk

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Darkened summer night
Great flying circle in sky
Beam me up Scotty

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Posted: May 2014

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Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 11, 2014

It's so you!! I love it!!

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 11, 2014

Whats me the little gray face guy? Cool I can dig that

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanMay 11, 2014

Nice try in the Haiku style

Never thought people can write SciFi in Haiku!

I would like to think the little Alien guy is cute....but who knows, he just might be a little dangerous....

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 11, 2014

They don't have snickers and Kentucky Fried Chicken up there Skywalker and make sure and eat your vegetables and drink lots of water.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAMay 11, 2014

M.M...............

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Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 11, 2014

Don't want Scotty to beem you up so high that you won't bev able to come back down and share some yummy pie my little guy in the sky!,,

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 11, 2014

Hi Jesse

That's class...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

LOL Miss ASG Im always pushing the limits or experimenting with anything. Glad you got a laugh and I think he may be harmless…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

OB1, where Im going I don't need KFC or my veggies I can just download it and dinner is served

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

Ck See you there

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

I have all kinds of pie Miss LGG

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

Always a pleasure my Lovely MRC

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 12, 2014

dear fjamesjPushing limits of experimentations;I love that thought

Kind reagards,Thea

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 12, 2014

Then I guess I will have to eat my pie all alone

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

Thank you Miss Whisper I appreciate your visits…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

That would be selfish , wouldn't it

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 12, 2014

LoL much love my West Coast Brother

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 12, 2014

hi Sir Jessie fantastic pen dear friend kudos hugs

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 12, 2014

Honey your my pie way up high in the sky

beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 12, 2014

jess, this is great
just makes me smile

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMay 13, 2014

This is so clever - SciFaiKu

title alone is so clever & funny
...and a fantastic haiku!
And how could I go w/o mentioning the Gif guy
Well, beam me up, Scotty!!(if that being ever runs up to me like that)

p.s.I'm still packing for my trip... but just couldn't pass this up (I absolutely love Star Trek and humor and poems..... lol)

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 13, 2014

Thank you Miss LS always a pleasure to bring someone a smile. Thank you

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 13, 2014

My main man McRad, yes I saw that and it was great entertainment for me. Appreciate the visit…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 13, 2014

Thank you so much Beautiful, I am glad you enjoyed and a humbled pleasure for your visit

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 13, 2014

Well thank you very much SCatlyn. That means a lot I especially appreciate that you like star trek and paused to take time to read before boarding a flight. I wouldn't fear the little guy I think they were just lost. Have a safe trip…Jesse

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