Universal Poet A Challenge Are u in

by fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida, USA

May 2014 1,018 Views 34 comments

The Universal Poet ( A Challenge, Are u in? )

Author: Poets Corner

I Dream of Angels but Live with Demons
Held by Fear within my Precious Bits Of Being
DISOWNED AND ALONE beside My Silent Cries
Inside of a Thunderstorm Somewhere Between The Lies
A Solitary Teardrop became a Countless Lake of tears
A never ending Vicious Cycle of Madness and DESPAIR!
Like Skyping with Satan beyond The Dark Room
To a Million Black Stars to The Poet & Her Muse
He has Magic for Sale, Dragons, and Defeated dreams
A Commitment of Love and Lust hidden with Mysterious Beauty
So shall I DARE TO DREAM amidst Colliding Galaxies
Many Love Well, but are Bowls of Cherries Scattering
But As The Day Arose Into Your Wild World
The Celtic Harp played a TUNE OF THE UNIVERSE
A Tango of Two Hearts in Erotic Shower of Rain
Where The Many Shades of love and Emerald Fire burn upon Your Face
Blowing away the Monster Ash deeply into its Beloved Grave
With my Warriors Journal of Viking Plunder you have written a new page
Kaleidoscoping Square Circles flaming colors unsymmetrical
Even the Grass Sizzles from the passion of a deeper integral
Morñing Wisdom yet revealed its glory by rejecting Scientific Proof
Its the Touching Treasure of Rainbow Highs that Im Fading Into You
Shy The Darkening Cloud of Melancholy oh faithful Winds Of The Night
Into The Song of Universal Poems where I Shall Know How To die
Silently into Your Wild World below your Starry Skies
Or deep into your precious flowers beneath the Liquid Sunset of your eyes

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Posted: May 2014

About this poem:

Ive been here a while and not only have I read from a lot of poets here but have made friends with you as well. So I put this together by using just your poem titles so technically you all wrote it. Every line holds one to three titles. It was fun so I thought maybe it would make a good challenge too, but you decide. For me its simply a dedication to you and a thanks for reading my many years of doom and gloom. It helped to "get it out there" as TruRob once said to me.. Many Thanks again, Cheers…Jesse
In the famous song of Legend Bob Marley
"One Love, One Heart,
Let's get together and feel all right…"

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Comments (34)

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 14, 2014

Wow wow you my friend you are the master of POERTY !,

this is such a well thought out and beautifully written poem!, I'm so impressed that I'm short on words of praise beautiful beautiful that's what you are !,

you have : so much talent i hope to one day in the near future see your poems in a published book of poetry !,

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAMay 14, 2014

I was going to do the exact same thing except with just my titles. This is a much better idea to include everyone else's. .......

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMay 14, 2014

Creative and awesome tribute Mr Jesse!

Ken

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Very kind and encouraging comment Miss LGG and I thank you very much was fun to write and hope you consider challenging yourself and partake.have a great say....Jesse

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAMay 14, 2014

Either you changed this to a challenge, or I need to put down the chimp tobacco. ....either way....im in.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Many thanks my fellow westerner. I do this thing when I'm surfing my channel guide where I sing the title of the TV shows as I scroll through the guide and the titles always seem to fall into place making a good story or song so one day I was doing the same as I was reading poetry and thus a poem was born but many thanks again you should lay it down my friend....jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Oopsy , skyping... Auto correct

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 14, 2014

Sir Jessie an outstanding pen of beauty cleverly put together hugs

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKMay 14, 2014

Excellent FJ.....A masterpiece of jigsaw puzzlery.....if there is such a word, you deserve to have it as your own....Good to see you are still around too....Andrew...

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanMay 14, 2014

I've tried this before, using poem titles in the poem... but yours is Superb! Nice Work!

reguiny2006Réguiny, Bretagne FranceMay 14, 2014

Jesse, I'm impressed with your ingenuity, you have the heart of a true poet, Phil.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

My Dearest Lady LShadow, so much love my friend and thank you for all of your encouraging words and the kindest of hearts. Always has been and always will be my pleasure to have known and know you…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Mr Andrew so good to see you and yep Im still here a poor sap that stopped looking for love and started searching myself, but I met all of you and to that is priceless. I do have to say though that all of this incognito slip sliding in and out of the Corner is unacceptable Always enjoyed your work and words so how bout a visit or two less few and more between Thank you always…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Perhaps a collaboration of the souls were already aligning before its dawn Miss ASG. Time is always a gift and will present each moment into its own so I look forward to more of it my alien friend

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Mr Sir Phil, I must say that I appreciate your most kind comment and am humbled to be presented by such a man of your poetic mechanics. There are many poets and poems that I feel will reverberate through time and you sir I believe to be one of them…Cheers my Dear Friend…Jesse

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lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMay 14, 2014

Very derp my dearly loved WCB.

My hat is off to your gift which you share for us all.

Take care my brother.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

Thank you much My Dearest WCS, much love and regards. If you ever want to chat message me.Regards

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 14, 2014

Hey Jesse! You ain't just a pretty face, I love this.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 14, 2014

The one and only Miss C, so glad you stopped in for a visit. I must say that you were the one who pushed me to move forward when I was always questioning if I should post something or not and since then three or more years ago I always await to see you. Thank you always much love for you . Thank you... Jesse

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMay 14, 2014

To put all those titles together into a
coherent story is a piece of work in itself
bro. Yet your language is a mystical and
colorful tapestry of deep prophetic spiritualism.
Great job!

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 14, 2014

Skillful piece Skywalker, you excel my friend. I would gladly join in on the challenge but as you well know it will take me some time.

beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 15, 2014

cool, jesse

nice job hon!

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 15, 2014

Thank you very much MR Jim, I have always enjoyed your visits and thoughts along with you pieces you've added to this little spot. Thank you much

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 15, 2014

Mr MMPNUnOBe1, you've been an inspiration and good friend for sure. At first when I read your work I was moved and at the same time I felt surpassed but now I see you as a friend and a great poet. Much love my friend and thank you …Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 15, 2014

Thank you The Lovely Beautiful you, you have too been an inspiration and kind. It has always been a pleasure and always will be

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaMay 16, 2014

"Let's get together and feel alright"...love the spirit my friend...thanks for putting this together...pretty awesome!! I might try putting a few titles together...

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaMay 16, 2014

You sir are an excellent wordsmith, this was just superb! Loved it my friend! J. be blessed

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMay 17, 2014

Hi Jesse,

What a great idea for a challenge. Now some of those poems I have read. Always nice to come back and peruse the talent. Cheers mate.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 17, 2014

Thank you very much my dear friend Miss Ok, we must keep them spirits flying my friend. Always a pleasure

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 17, 2014

Thank you Mr J , so glad you stopped by. Much love and cheers…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 17, 2014

Thank you much Mate for stopping by and still say a pleasure to see you old friend..Jesse

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMay 17, 2014

See, thats poetry....reminds me about that song all about eve...marthers harbor....
yours is the best poem ive read....ever

FergalggNorth, Antrim IrelandMay 17, 2014

i mean it, i can be sacry but thats what poems are....deep...and rhyme...and not just how people feel on the day...which most people do here....not very poetic

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 21, 2014

Thank you much for your comment and time Fergalgg very much and humbling at that. I read all of the poets here and isn't that what its about. Feeling from whats with in no matter intro or extroverted. Many thanksTo you and all the many poets here whom have inspired me and this piece by their graceful pens..Cheers…Jesse

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