Darkened

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Toys scattered over the play ground, lost
Taunts cries lingering as if in a stance
All gone, but one left with darkened feelings
Holding onto life's gift of second chance


Searching deeply for strength to continue
Gathering power to hold close to thee
No need for mirrors every step engraved
No one knows me better than I know me


Releasing visions of what I would like
Freeing destiny to be as it should
Paining myself by allowing it so
Letting go of what one knows is not good


Torn but still completely whole my soul bare
Some weights in life one must carry not share
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Just how I am feeling here of latly

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darkhorse555
deep powerfully penned touching piece of writing dear friend god bless angel wine
lindsyjonesonline now!
Nice to read you Happy. It has been a while, welcome back and thanks for the share..
Happygolucky4u
Thank you darkhorse bouquet
nighty70
hey happy
i see you are a nice poetess too great text greetingsapplause
Earlgreytea
[Taunts cries lingering as if in a stance; Some weights in life one must carry not share]

Wow! Breathtakingly poetical and hauntingly beautiful, thank you...,

kiss
trurorob
Not like you Sherri, but a nice write with a touch of the dark.
Rob
Redex
First hugs for you hug for after writing with those depths you feel it.
fjamesj9701
First off hello My Lady so nice to see you. I enjoyed your expression as I can connect with them but yet I share here every time . Maybe perhaps because I feel as long as I can release then I let go a little moe each time. Warm regards and a big fat monkey hug for you…Jessewine teddybear
orientalkoru
Ditto with Jesse HGL4U ...lovely to read from you again. Second chances in life...a wonderful feeling...the past no longer weighs you down...and knowing today is a fresh start and you know where your strengths come from for no one knows you better than you. teddybear gift
Happygolucky4u
Thank you my friend (lindsyjones) it has been to long for me. Only checking in from time to time to read and try and see how the few I know are doing. teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Nighty you are such a delight to this corner and blogs thank you for reading my poem wave
Happygolucky4u
Earlgreytea what can I say to you but.........bowing stay well my friend wine
Happygolucky4u
trurorob thank you for reading my poem grin I am trying my hand at something different.






Redex Thanks so much for the hug! And the comment. Many hugs to you my friend teddybear






fjamesj Monkey hug back at you jesse ! teddybear





orientalkoru Thank you for your comment. In life I have had second chances third chances and a few last chances uh oh laugh wave
Ahyra
Nice poem, perfect expression of a dark moment, very nice to read HGL bouquet
Happygolucky4u
Thank you Ahyra, so good to see you here wave
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by Happygolucky4u (159 Poems)
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