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by Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida, USA

Aug 2014 1,024 Views 12 comments

The Kiss (5-7-5 Challenge)

Author: Happygolucky4u
My soul lost to time

My breath slowly evades me

Your lips touching mine
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2014

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Comments (12)

niah9
niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 31, 2014
now that is a way to explain a kiss....a soul lost in time.....applause
kteddybear
SCatlyn
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 31, 2014
Happy!!!!

Great to see you!! AND
I love this! It's beautiful to the max - and this line:

'...breath slowly evades me' - so unique & outstanding.

This entire 5-7-5 haiku is just lovely happy place

SCatlyn purple heart
Spartacus2012
Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 31, 2014
Lovely haiku Happy!

Kenballoons
Fellsman
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 1, 2014
Dear Happy

Deliciously romantic - that kiss sounds perfectly divine...

Kindest regards

Bill gift wine
darkhorse555
darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandSep 1, 2014
really a sweet very beautiful piece excellent dear friendangel wine
Mizzy4
Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandSep 1, 2014
Sultry and sensuous Happy,
Tasty Haiku.......
Regards Mick.

teddybear
Odette67
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 1, 2014
My soul lost to time

My breath slowly evades me

Your lips touching mine

I just love this Haiku Happy. purple heart bouquet
Girlygirl196349
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USASep 1, 2014
Lovely teddybear
Happygolucky4uonline today!
Happygolucky4uOPTreasure Coast, Florida USASep 1, 2014
Thank you each and everyone of you for taking the time to read my poem and comment bouquet
gnj4u
gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USASep 2, 2014
Hi, Happygolucky4u,
My soul lost to time... All I can say is, "What a kiss! and what a nice haiku." Thanks for sharing.
candykid
candykidAshburn, Virginia USASep 2, 2014
Beautiful word choice. I'm happy I got so lucky. purple heart
rusticbink
rusticbinkmooseYaw, Saskatchewan CanadaAug 1, 2015
Very nice!
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by Happygolucky4u (159 Poems)
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