Life sentence

Thank you for your input everyone...
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
just wondering what comes to mind when one is waiting to be (life) sentenced

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darkhorse555
such a deep beautifully drawn picture dear friends excellently penned loves how you drew the visionangel
orientalkoru
Liam dear friend thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment. It's poets like you who take the time to leave a word or two whether my poem is acceptable or whether it's an utter disgrace that makes me feel I belong. It's not approval or praise I am looking for, just connection. The acknowledgement and support I have always longed to receive hasn't come and I've waited a long time now. I realize my poetry is not at par but then again I have always been honest of my being a greenhorn. I'm not a natural born poet, I struggle to write but I write as a means of therapy. It hurts but just have to accept some facts of life. Thank you once again...I am currently struggling to come to terms with health issues...and to have someone take time and notice means a lot to someone like me who is waiting for her life to be sentenced. It made me feel someone understood my predicament and it warmed my heart. I am still hoping for a positive outcome...fingers crossed! May God Bless you always... gift
Odette67
Dearest Orientalkoru,
Do not put yourself down - there are many people who will do that for you.
You write beautiful poetry - Your poems come from your heart and soul - You are a well loved member of this corner.

I wish you well my dear.teddybear angel sad flower
fjamesj9701
Dearest Orientalkoru,
Do not put yourself down - there are many people who will do that for you.
You write beautiful poetry - Your poems come from your heart and soul - You are a well loved member of this corner.


You know she's right my Dearest OK, nicely expressed words my friend(s). Warmest regards always…Jessewine teddybear
lindsyjonesonline today!
Well kabsat, having lived the life that is not easy to forget is one drawback of changing but simplicity does create sense of good feeling for this world that is full of inequities.

I don't even buy and or look at them anymore, as they only serve the fancy taste of those that are still in the world of cloudy and hazy touch of reality. But good for them.

A very touching tale my friend..
candykid
Ako ay manalangin para sa iyo at sa iyong kalusugan ... ikaw ay isang mahusay na manunulat....thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, orientalkoru,
Waiting, still hoping; flipping pages of magazines… Oh, how well you have captured those feelings of anxiety before the verdict is revealed. a life well-lived deserves to hear "Innocent!" and the sentence should be Life. Thank you for sharing.
orientalkoru
Thanks for your comforting words and yes Christina...I totally agree with you..I am quite aware even the ones who you expect to lift you up will choose to let you down...never my intention to put myself down though it might look like that...I'm happy with myself and with what I can do. I'm at a point in my life where I've learnt to accept others and their actions and not let them affect me. Thanks once again my lady for your up-lifting comments. gift teddybear wine
orientalkoru
Totally agree with you and Christina my friend Jesse...thanks for dropping in and sharing your thoughts... always appreciated.. gift thumbs up angel
Spartacus2012
Awesome reflective write O.K.

Kentip hat
orientalkoru
Phyllis...Agyammannak kabsat iti isasar-ong mo ditoy. Kabsat inayonnak kadi iti karkararagmo...agyammannak unay kabsat.

Totally agree with you about the magz. I never buy them ...it's to me just pure vanity. Yet while I had my shop I use to collect them from a dairy store(the one's they throw away at the end of the week) for my clients and I must say I've read them but I won't pay for them.teddybear bouquet wine hug
Mizzy4
Kathy, your poem brought a tear,
Please, Please, don't stop writing,
or ever consider yourself below
anyone here........
I know about time ticking,
but I also know hoew to dig deep,
So don't underestimate the power
of your own mind, for it is the strongest
most positive thing you own.
Mick.

hug hug hug thumbs up
orientalkoru
Christian maraming salamat mahal kong kaibigan...nawa'y pagpalain ako ng Maykapal at ng aking kalusugan. Naniniwala ako sa taos pusong pagdarasal...maraming salamat ulit! Salamat din sa pagtangkilik mo sa akin mga simpleng tula! Pagpalain ka nawa ng Puong Maykapa! gift thumbs up
123whisper
Awasam writingthumbs up teddybear
orientalkoru
Joy I can never thank you enough for your support and how often you've gone the extra mile to show how much you care... You have a deep understanding of people's situations ... I'll never forget! You are a beautiful person. angel
orientalkoru
Thanks Ken much appreciated...
orientalkoru
Mick, I knew you were a good man the moment I saw your eyes from your profile photo...and you proved to be one. Thank you for being a champion to a lot of us here in this corner. For the ones of us who know what you are battling with, the strength and calm you project is just awesome and very inspiring. Time is ticking alright, I guess to many of us and I totally agree in the power of a strong mind. Thank you once again!gift angel
orientalkoru
@123whisper...thank you dear lady for your kind comment. You are beautiful and kind and it's a blessing to have met you in this corner. teddybear gift hug wine thumbs up angel
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