Wind torn tattered excuse of a heart now moving ever so slightly in the breeze Hanging from its line remembering a time when we both would melt like ice on a hot July day
Times that tell of movie theater kisses and eyelash wishes I wished that I could somehow stop time but time kept moving on And at some point it left me behind
I don't mean to sound ungrateful This is way before you proved unfaithful During a time when I would count the freckles on your back and create my own personal constellations And make my own personal observations about how I liked your hair either up or down
Time kept moving on and so did you Far past those days that made love stories for our souls and left us with just deep dark holes Too dark to see what was left behind
Maybe its all for the best And someday I'll be doing fine But at the moment its seems as though the only thing I have to show Is a tattered heart hanging from a line
You write with so much depth and clarity I would have thought it was written by someone decades older than you are... What can I say.. it is just beautiful poetry ! Once again !
Wonderfully expressed in only the way that you can, as always uniquely. Thank you, Anna
Blizza801OPBillings, Montana USAFeb 25, 2010
Thank you very much =)
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandFeb 26, 2010
Why so young and pain so soon,you are a talented,nice looking lad,snap out of it & move on to greener pastures.Beautifully chosen words, has an impact.God bless you....
Me writing and sharing my pain...is me moved a long. Its past but never really forgotten. The words just seem to flow from a place inside me that holds onto my own personal stories of love and loss, of passion and pain, of triumph and regret. I called them my "Memoirs of An Elastic Mind". 30 years from now I will still remember all of it like it was yesterday...every last moment burnt into my core. Every loving embrace and cold shoulder. Every show of commitment and those never returned. Every time I have been broken and hurt and every time I have made a tear run down the cheek of some heartbroken girl who thought my love would last forever. I write what I know...not because I dwell on it and don't move on. I write what I know because its what I have left to remember. Its what I will never forget, the Memoirs of An Elastic Mind.
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting =)
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusFeb 27, 2010
From a fellow 'Texan', I lived in Houston for 12 years or so. Your poem is absolutely beautiful, nuff said. On the up-side, hey, you're in Texas, 'lift up your eyes', as another poet said, and give another gorgeous Texas gal, a chance, will ya? love and light...
nicki_loveoriginally from Venus, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 2, 2010
Wow! Each write I read, is more and more interesting! Man, you are so talented! I have read a lot of poetry and you come so close to writing perfect prose!
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Its past but never really forgotten. The words just seem to flow from a place inside me that holds onto my own personal stories of love and loss, of passion and pain, of triumph and regret. I called them my "Memoirs of An Elastic Mind".
30 years from now I will still remember all of it like it was yesterday...every last moment burnt into my core.
Every loving embrace and cold shoulder.
Every show of commitment and those never returned.
Every time I have been broken and hurt and every time I have made a tear run down the cheek of some heartbroken girl who thought my love would last forever.
I write what I know...not because I dwell on it and don't move on.
I write what I know because its what I have left to remember.
Its what I will never forget,
the Memoirs of An Elastic Mind.
Thank you all so much for reading and commenting =)
love and light...