Wind Torn

Wind torn tattered excuse of a heart
now moving ever so slightly in the breeze
Hanging from its line
remembering a time
when we both would melt like ice on a hot July day

Times that tell of movie theater kisses
and eyelash wishes
I wished that I could somehow stop time
but time kept moving on
And at some point it left me behind

I don't mean to sound ungrateful
This is way before you proved unfaithful
During a time
when I would count the freckles on your back
and create my own personal constellations
And make my own personal observations
about how I liked your hair
either up or down

Time kept moving on and so did you
Far past those days that made
love stories for our souls
and left us with just deep dark holes
Too dark to see what was left behind

Maybe its all for the best
And someday I'll be doing fine
But at the moment its seems as though
the only thing I have to show
Is a tattered heart hanging from a line
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2010

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trurorob
why do we always seem to rue lost love, like the way you expressed it here Blizza
rob
QuietStormF
You write with so much depth and clarity I would have thought it was written by someone decades older than you are... What can I say.. it is just beautiful poetry ! Once again ! applause cheering hug teddybear bouquet gotta go
jazzy75
Blizza - well expressed poem full of intense feeling! Thanks for sharing!!cheers
Blizza801
Thank you...I'm glad that you enjoy my words,,,that means a lot to me...thank you so much
luvuluvme2
Blizza, thank you for this, we all been there I am sure. broken heart angel
Kinderling
Wonderfully expressed in only the way that you can, as always uniquely. Thank you, Anna
Blizza801
Thank you very much =)
paloma66
Why so young and pain so soon,you are a talented,nice looking lad,snap out of it & move on to greener pastures.Beautifully chosen words, has an impact.God bless you....applause thumbs up hug
boyshchrm6
Beautiful and well exspressed.cool angel thumbs up applause
Blizza801
Me writing and sharing my pain...is me moved a long.
Its past but never really forgotten. The words just seem to flow from a place inside me that holds onto my own personal stories of love and loss, of passion and pain, of triumph and regret. I called them my "Memoirs of An Elastic Mind".
30 years from now I will still remember all of it like it was yesterday...every last moment burnt into my core.
Every loving embrace and cold shoulder.
Every show of commitment and those never returned.
Every time I have been broken and hurt and every time I have made a tear run down the cheek of some heartbroken girl who thought my love would last forever.
I write what I know...not because I dwell on it and don't move on.
I write what I know because its what I have left to remember.
Its what I will never forget,
the Memoirs of An Elastic Mind.

Thank you all so much for reading and commenting =)
Earlgreytea
From a fellow 'Texan', I lived in Houston for 12 years or so. Your poem is absolutely beautiful, nuff said. On the up-side, hey, you're in Texas, 'lift up your eyes', as another poet said, and give another gorgeous Texas gal, a chance, will ya?
love and light...
nicki_love
Wow! Each write I read, is more and more interesting! Man, you are so talented! I have read a lot of poetry and you come so close to writing perfect prose!
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