The V trail led by Mr duck, was rippling at a fast speed. He, seeking bread floating on top of the water dropped by the hand of a wee daughter. Without invite, a skimming ot 6,7 more ducks flew in landing too with a din. The childs delight was plain to see, she giggled and nearly toppled in to swim too, her father held her reins fast with a laugh. Breakfast at an end, and all was quiet again.
Lovely images Redex.... Dad & daughter creating life long memories
Regds Mick.
Titania48Carlisle, Cumbria, England UKAug 2, 2015
You paint a lovely picture here with words Red. Reminded me of my girls when they were little, they loved feeding ducks, and I loved to see the delight on their little faces, such simple things can bring us so much joy.
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoAug 4, 2015
Your description of this scene captures its humanity and innocence perfectly. Lovely piece of writing!
RedexOPNorthumberland, England UKAug 5, 2015
socrates you do my ego good. I am not a poet as such just like writing what I see in life, some good some bad
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandAug 5, 2015
Hi Redex
You paint a charming scene, really beautiful!
Martina xxx
RedexOPNorthumberland, England UKAug 7, 2015
Martina thank you for reading. Now you know how peaceful my Sunday morning walk was.
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKOct 31, 2017
Lovely poem Redex. .such a delightful experience watching families feeding the ducks...something I've found enjoyable often in the past...the simple yet exquisite blessing of nature at its best :)
RedexOPNorthumberland, England UKNov 1, 2017
Happychatty thank you muchly for reading and comment, luckily my Sundays are the same always see something which is a pure delight
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKNov 6, 2017
Enjoyed reading it again as I do other poems...how fortunate we are to be able to read and write poetry ...great your Sunday’s are so lovely Redex it’s the simpler things in life that bring great joy hey...walks outdoors watching ducks swim and feed and their ducklings ...adorable Thanks again for sharing your poem
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Kathy
Dad & daughter creating
life long memories
Regds Mick.
Lovely piece of writing!
You paint a charming scene, really beautiful!
Martina xxx
Thanks again for sharing your poem