I sure do hope your not heart broken ,we think we will die without From a broken .truth be told our heart began healing it's self it may take many many years but it does grow back some. Keep yourself safe
pinksdejavuSomewhere, West Virginia USAFeb 5, 2016
WOW! Very intense write. I can feel your pain sweets. Makes me want to reach out and hug you. I'm here for you. Please take good care of yourself. God Bless You! Hugz, Pink.
Very strong feelings my friend. Love is not sad, for when we are in love we live it. The sad is that the other does not appreciate what he has. Your love life will blossom again, those that love with intensity can love again. It is your choice. Fear not the unbearable because time comes to pass and you life will get recharged. You have been blessed being able to love; there are others out there that don't know about that extraudinary feeling, so take care of self and you are going to deserve better.
doglover14OPhudson, New York USAFeb 10, 2016
Abby 1963
My heart's been broken more than once ~ but you're right, it always seem to heal itself...to a degree ! The scars never heal completely, but hopefully make us wiser...( sorta doubt that one...lol).
Thank you again for your kinds comments.
Mady
doglover14OPhudson, New York USAFeb 17, 2016
Pink,
Thank you again for your kind concern.
I haven't been on this sight for very long, but I'm so impressed and thankful for the support that has been shown to me!
We women are all stronger than we think we are. We are all survivors.
Mady
doglover14OPhudson, New York USAFeb 22, 2016
SouthMiami
Thank you so very much for your support.
Yes, I am fortunate to have been able to love...over...and over...and over again ~ throughout my life.
The pain can be intense when it does not go well; but the great joy that fills ones being when that love is returned, makes it all worth it.
Mady
doglover14OPhudson, New York USAMar 16, 2016
Even though you may never read this, I just wanted to let you know that your arms are still a big part of my world.
Very well composed a confession autobiographical narrative in poetry events vivid, very lively, gradually build up - every lover's story piece by piece in peace beaded dexterously, weaving web of love, employing figures of speech like pun, alliteration, conceit reminding John Donne.
real heart felt feelings in a great melodious, sensuous and pictorial style like a true love bewitched never losing grip off the theme imagery boom up blossoming - effects felt sentimentally
the two intertwined the complains by the protagonist adds innocently to the authority of genuine feelings. The priorities weighed math is done whether to minus or keep to addition votes for addition
Ohhh thank you for the lovely composition
doglover14OPhudson, New York USAMar 17, 2016
amfa7
Thank you so much for your profoud comments. I'm so glad you enjyed this poem.
Comments (10)
Kathy
From a broken .truth be told our heart began healing it's self it may take many many years but it does grow back some. Keep yourself safe
Love is not sad, for when we are in love we live it.
The sad is that the other does not appreciate what he has.
Your love life will blossom again, those that love with intensity can love again. It is your choice.
Fear not the unbearable because time comes to pass and you life will get recharged.
You have been blessed being able to love; there are others out there that don't know about that extraudinary feeling, so take care of self and you are going to deserve better.
My heart's been broken more than once ~ but you're right, it always seem to heal itself...to a degree !
The scars never heal completely, but hopefully make us wiser...( sorta doubt that one...lol).
Thank you again for your kinds comments.
Mady
Thank you again for your kind concern.
I haven't been on this sight for very long, but I'm so impressed and thankful for the support that has been shown to me!
We women are all stronger than we think we are.
We are all survivors.
Mady
Thank you so very much for your support.
Yes, I am fortunate to have been able to love...over...and over...and over again ~ throughout my life.
The pain can be intense when it does not go well; but the great joy that fills ones being when that love is returned, makes it all worth it.
Mady
a confession
autobiographical narrative in poetry
events vivid, very lively, gradually build up - every lover's story
piece by piece in peace beaded dexterously, weaving web of love, employing figures of speech like pun, alliteration, conceit reminding John Donne.
real heart felt feelings
in a great melodious, sensuous and pictorial style
like a true love bewitched never losing grip off the theme
imagery boom up blossoming - effects felt sentimentally
the two intertwined
the complains by the protagonist adds innocently to the authority
of genuine feelings.
The priorities weighed
math is done
whether to minus or keep to addition
votes for
addition
Ohhh thank you for the lovely composition
Thank you so much for your profoud comments.
I'm so glad you enjyed this poem.
Mady