My heart did flipflops in the predawn light Filled with such a sense of calm I knew not from whence it came Sunlight danced majestically upon the placid lake Stirring in me feelings I had long ago buried Neath the rubble in my mind As I sat transfixed, slowly sipping coffee from a steaming mug I lazily drank in the sounds of a new day dawning Slowly awakening from it's twilight slumber I could not move , did not want to move From this new place where I was bathed in such serenity Had it really been here all the while? As I pondered this thought, I heard a rustling in the wind Calling to me , heeding me to seize this day For it will never come again .
Thank-you Gypsyheart.. this one I think is my favourite that I have written...
angel2311Windsor, Ontario CanadaJan 20, 2010
wow I just had to read this poem for a second time, it made my heart jump. I just love your choice of words they touch deep down in my soul. I feel like I am right there with you in your pain in your heart ache in your joy. You are truly amazing!!! Angel
Thank-you Lonewolf... this is also my favourite poem too... has it all sun water and nature... my favourite things.. Yhanks for taking the time to comment..
Comments (27)
Q~S
you were really merging with the nature.that oneness is very rare to achieve.
wm
Very well written...so BEAUTIFUL done....I hate to say tis but from all the ones i haveread so far this one is my favorite!!!!
Q~S