A New Day Dawning..

A New Day Dawning

My heart did flipflops in the predawn light
Filled with such a sense of calm
I knew not from whence it came
Sunlight danced majestically upon the placid lake
Stirring in me feelings I had long ago buried
Neath the rubble in my mind
As I sat transfixed, slowly sipping coffee from a steaming mug
I lazily drank in the sounds of a new day dawning
Slowly awakening from it's twilight slumber
I could not move , did not want to move
From this new place where I was bathed in such serenity
Had it really been here all the while?
As I pondered this thought, I heard a rustling in the wind
Calling to me , heeding me to seize this day
For it will never come again .
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
Carpe diem Indeed seize this day...

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Comments (27)

poetengineer
really simple sweet poem , i like it , u have special way in ur writing , thanks for share and best wishes in u nice way in ur writing
Bentlee
Really nice Q S, as i read it i could sit in that spot an allow me to see what you felt as you wrote. :) ty.
PassionatePoetonline today!
Wow! Now I'm impressed. Excellent transfer of thoughts, desires, and dreams to prose. Maybe one day you will drenched in more serenity than rubble. bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks Poet.. I am glad you liked it.. teddybear
Q~S
QuietStormF
Thanks Bentlee..It was on the deck overlooking the lake at my cottage, very nice and very serene.. The water has always been my "happy place"teddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks Poet, I'm glad you liked.. and I am beginning to feel that serenity again. teddybear
angel2311
This one is so majestical and full of hope. You rock Girl!bouquet
QuietStormF
There I go rocking again.. Thanks for your comments... and I am home now..Never got my manicure though,, hmmm... next time....teddybear
andrew149
A sense of peace here, thankyou QSF......andrew.....xxx
boyshchrm6
Very calming QuietStorm: Life is too fleeting. Embrace all you can. Nice.angel sad flower
walkerman
quetstormF:

you were really merging with the nature.that oneness is very rare to achieve.

wm thumbs up
QuietStormF
Thank-you Andrew.. yes a very calming peace it is.. hug
QuietStormF
Thank-you boyshchrm6 and yes.. I agree wholeheartedly... Live love and laugh.. and be happy! hug teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Walkerman.. I have a love o nature.. that's true.. hug teddybear
gypsyheart
Such splendour in the new day dawning.Thank you for the beautiful picture of peacefulness and very powerful thoughts QuietStormFhug teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Gypsyheart.. this one I think is my favourite that I have written... hug
angel2311
wow I just had to read this poem for a second time, it made my heart jump. I just love your choice of words they touch deep down in my soul. I feel like I am right there with you in your pain in your heart ache in your joy. You are truly amazing!!! Angel
QuietStormF
Yhank-you so much for your comments Angel.. one of my favorites I have written on here.. hug teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you not yank you.. laugh Sorry......teddybear
jazzy75
QuietStorm - wonderful poem capturing a perfect moment in time...thanks for sharingpeace
john0217
serenity is one of the greatest feelings good job
QuietStormF
Thank-u Jazzy... for your commnts... truly one of the best of mine that I think that I have written and posted on this site..teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks for your comments John.. Yes inner peace is a great thing!teddybear
lonewolf1962
WOW!!!
Very well written...so BEAUTIFUL done....I hate to say tis but from all the ones i haveread so far this one is my favorite!!!!kiss hug
QuietStormF
Thank-you Lonewolf... this is also my favourite poem too... has it all sun water and nature... my favourite things.. wine Yhanks for taking the time to comment.. hug heart beating bouquet teddybear
Hottblooded
I truly liked this poem. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Hotblooded.. It is one of my favourites I have written too.. kind of special to me.. hug teddybear

Q~S
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