A thought

I wrote a poem.
It was of sensuality,
It was of intimacy,
Not of sexuality. It
Was of passion and desires.
It was of me, asking
My lover, to give
Up her passion so
I may have my desire.

A critic told me this,
Which I was unaware.
To which I could say
" Tis my poem, let me be."
I say nay to this!

An artist with his brush,
Paints so that another
See the beauty he sees,
A poet's brush is
His words, yet if
They are not fashioned
Targeted, honed precisely
At his intended, they
Fall on deaf ears,
Satisfying no but
himself.
And to even of
Vainest men, this
Is a worthless endeavor.

So to you, my friend,
With that one thought,
I say thank you.
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Posted: Jul 2010

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agoodguy2have
and if the painting is never seen or the song never heard or the perfume never smelled than all is for...self satisfaction, which must be enough. thanks Cam
gnj4u
Hi, cambuff,
One may write to inspire, to be read, to challenge thought or, sometimes, just so the reader can make of it what he or she will. When we write to be understood, we must first know our audience. Nice write.
sophiasummer
Hello cambuff

From what you write,
from all you have learn't, its all good

simple reminder

do write, draw what ever you feel within,
as that is poetry in motion

there are never guidelines
or all of us would never be here

"Poetry shall never fell to deaf ears upon"

As the figures of listening, has already opened door.

and there you are.....

My wonderful friends whom have already
shared their voice, above me

I can only stand beside them

and we await...

SS
So to you, my friend,
With that one thought,
I say thank you.

trurorob
loved it Dave!
rob
caroljoyce
Nice one, Cam.
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